The Jabberwock


"The Jabberwock"

My words flew 
away from me
like a flock 
of murderous 
black crows

but little did I know
they were good omen
and on their wings
I flew to the forest
of the Lawrence Tree

where strange
creatures come 
and go
they say it's the 
in-between place

where poets dream
rest for a while 
the nightmares
and the unblessed
disagreeing, agreeing

with their reflections
mere shadows
of self-perception
and all the virtues
from hate to love

from disregard
to fallacy to truth 
to ignorance is bliss
to the inevitable 
I have no time for this

but they don’t know
you could count 
the trolls like marks
in a wall, like cuts in skin
stinging nettles

forever
lying beached 
on your shore
the poisonous
blue bottles

the good and bad
come and go
black and white hats
angels in burning bushes
back to heaven and hell

then heaven
and hell and back again
the jokes subliminal
we all write our own story
we all fall under the category

“criminal”

in one way or another
we blame 
our fathers
our mothers
we are all question marks

God is in the detail
close to home
usually missed 
in editing
and far from pure

though 
the crusaders
will deny 
what’s real
they know best

I put this moment here
it says, for you to 
contradict the failure
to obscure the real
what is and what is not

it’s all about you,
you know,
not the Jabberwock, 
the story 
puts you to its test


(LadyLabyrinth / 2023)






"Jig of Life"/Kate Bush (Mr Marrs, Youtube channel).
Preferred primary video. Yet...
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Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 2:56 PM
"I put this moment here..."
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March 16, 2023 at 2:56 PM
https://youtu.be/Mgwz1JBon2E
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 5:17 AM
hmmm, yes. And we, (that would be, those that matter), know my thoughts on the background of that particular author and his story about Alice. But this is not a story about that author.
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 5:08 AM
"Jig of Life"/Kate Bush (Mr Marr's, Youtube). Preferred Primary Video for this poem. Unable to embed. But then, The Jabberwock, fits perfectly. ;)
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 5:22 AM
Below link, first choice for Primary Video to embed with this poem. But alas...fate, the "universe', would have otherwise.
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 5:10 AM
https://youtu.be/Mgwz1JBon2E
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March 16, 2023 at 5:07 AM
"Johnny Jabberwocky" (lenn9, Youtube)
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March 16, 2023 at 5:08 AM
https://youtu.be/CfclMlRfTiM
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