The Italian Job

I'm feeling dreamy again today
must be the weather, some may say
but my mind transports me back, to a peaceful place
to a place in Tuscany, my dreamland to chase

Its a little back yard, Italian inspired
all the charm of the Med ,  no travel required
it has elegance and is chic ,to draw in the senses
its my place just be, to dream,  if l am tense

A stone path, of course, is a natural must
and terracotta for warmth, a rustic touch
and natural materials, for gentle night dinning 
a few citrus trees, give leaves,  a fragrant , crush

Its an Italian flair, paved with olives and herbs
sitting on crimson green pillows , for scents to transfer 
l'll have a pergola,  and climbing plants too
a grapevine and jasmine 
of plants that l grew

a set of string lights, for ambience at night
and the vines above tangles,  just for delight
and l'll scent the night air , with candles,  too
and a small water feature, just in our view

we'll sip in red wine
watching stars in the pool
with lily scented air
in the hours , as it cools

l'll have lavender and roses , to frame little paths 
and a small pizza oven, an idea aftermath
and l'll have painted wall tiles and a dwarf lemon tree
its my own cozy spot,
so come 
sit with me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 7/6/2025 10:01:00 AM
Absolutely amazing! The description of the paradise you painted is vivid and I can see it with my eyes closed. I love the rhyming scheme and what you were able to draw out. I've never been to Tuscany, but I'll put it on my bucket list...Thanks! :) - Diana
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Date: 7/5/2025 3:34:00 PM
You've created a little paradise - in your poem, and sounds like, in your back yard - sounds lovely.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/5/2025 11:42:00 PM
yes its going to be my own little paradise, l just need hubby to agree to do all the hard work..shushhh, he doesnt know anything about it..yet... lol. Thanks for dropping by, hope yr having great weekend. J.
Date: 7/5/2025 12:22:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your Lovely "The Italian Job" write. Love your ending with a cozy spot. Sounds heavenly... Have a wonderful day writing away..................
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/5/2025 12:28:00 PM
thank you Paula. us girls can ( and should ) always have a dream lol we need escapism in this chaotic world. I'm always re-designing my back garden..maybe one day l'll make it come true :)Happy writing days to you too. all the best. J.
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