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The Inviolate Bloom

Written: July 26, 2026 for a contest sponsored by Kerry Bernatchez ************* Tremulous in twilight, a stark white rose casts its gentle shadow— stone silence clasped in green sheaths, ochre strokes encasing the sturdy stem. Faint scent of rain still cleaving to its rims. It quaffs the dusk, a sashay of petals— sedate yet salient, a stitched seam of sorrow and solace. A dream of a ruby lotus floating in the air, yet anchored in its stony stillness. The stalk cold, slick with evening dew. The intricate lattice of its form, Tuscan citrine veins shine below pale skin, whispers in the gale breeze, as sequins of dew drip in dawn crown. A single thorn pricks the curious hand. Worn whispers weave— this bloom tempers its sorrow, an understated harbinger, a cold stream of light, a haunting melody in delicate dawn. Its shadow sprawls long across the stone. It velvet-crowns without voice, silent edicts without sound. Its soil below—a crawling mound, each drifter pricked by its unique touch, each spirit wrapped in its holy sheen, their breath frozen at the sight of its iron flower. And still—in magenta dusk, as twilight trembles again, ochre horizons drape bloom in close patina. Valves sway in an amber light— shivering, sloping, glowing, in shadowed creases of wanton time. The lone white head holds its timeless place: its fragrance floats, faint but firm in falling air— a sacred ring of rest, a solemn vow of hope, a single rose gleaming in gloom.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 11:02 AM
your imagery and alliteration made for an engaging and breathtaking poem. especially liked: a solemn vow of hope, a single rose gleaming in gloom. wishing you well
Buhagiar Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 4:04 AM
Your poems are always a delight to read. One could feel the rhythm in those wonderful lines.
George Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 12:28 AM
This is such a delightful read. Love the phrases like 'a sashay of petals, an intricate lattice, silent edicts without sound'... et al . Wonderful work. Love it as each word used is so poetic and in common vocabulary unlike some words you often use making one rack one's brain. Into my FAVE.
Rolland Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 3:17 PM
brilliant and musical poetry, always enjoy your talent, thanks poet Sotto
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 2:46 PM
I am wondering what the rose is a metaphor for in this work. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara K.
Cunningham Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 11:17 AM
You take the reader on an amazing journey Lassad, such amazing detail on the humble rose, we have them in our garden and look beautiful in bloom. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 10:03 AM
I enjoyed reading your "The Inviolate Bloom" write. What pretty flowers you have here. A wonderful ending... "Good Luck" Have a Blessed Day/Week To Come Writing Away...............
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