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The Interworld

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("The Interworld", 2018, original encaustic) The Interworld An Interworld of fading light twilight, midnight Never bright Of shadows shifting moving on spiral ‘round and then gone A dance a play at edge of thought time and space come to naught To leave us right where we started The Interworld Now open hearted (9/28/23)

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Les Pick

Date: 11/12/2023 3:03:00 AM

Nicely said I enjoyed it thanks for sharing. Regards Les.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/3/2023 10:50:00 PM

A very New Age style poem. I enjoyed it.

James Moore
Date: 10/23/2023 8:39:00 PM

Thanks Hilda!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/29/2023 2:27:00 PM

a powerful image that perfectly matches your poem...a poem that seemed a bit surreal. The read was captivating. Sara (Bill Baker's wife)

James Moore
Date: 10/2/2023 7:32:00 AM

Thanks Sara, I love how encaustics get a life of their own (from the wax and oil pigments getting blended via blow torch!) - they lend themselves to evocative abstraction - like poetry.

James Moore

Date: 9/28/2023 5:28:00 PM

Interworld - by Buckethead https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ikZxSnk3SNs

Bill Baker

Date: 9/28/2023 5:06:00 PM

The photo matched the poetry well, James. I agree, a moody category would be convenient. :-) Have a great week! Bill

James Moore
Date: 9/28/2023 5:33:00 PM

Thanks Bill. This painting was a big inspiration for this poem (I just love the enigmatic quality of "interworld"). Also the guitar instrumental of this title by Buckethead which I just attached a link to.

Karen Jones

Date: 9/28/2023 2:44:00 PM

Enjoyed the rhyme.

James Moore
Date: 9/28/2023 4:17:00 PM

Thanks!

Tom Woody

Date: 9/28/2023 9:54:00 AM

Has a Twilight Zone feel to it. Interesting poetry James

James Moore
Date: 9/28/2023 10:00:00 AM

Yes, thanks Tom. I wish PS had a category for "moody."