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The Inner Sanctum

The party started Conversations, awkwardness Pop…pop, laughter The smoke released like a genie in a bottle His wishes found in the inner sanctum Hard core stuff He’s adrift Left the party by way of sea drifting endlessly Always the inner sanctum…there goes his sanity Doesn’t care Davy Jones just begging him to jump in His legs dangle over the edge His needles like jellyfish sting But he begged for mercy to the unknown There’s something else in the whirlpool He had kicked the can in the backyard of the parking lot Often pacing waiting for the fish to swim out He had to be somewhere yet he was nowhere Go ask Alice the neon sign always blinking As if a banquet church lets out He almost believes when the kids jump about The sun seems to stun even on a cloudy day So he knows his boat must speed inside the cave He had already thrown back the waves He’s found the inner sanctum where the faithful pray He’s walking on water He’s trusted someone to catch him as he falls back He’s dead then alive again Baptized…born again He can trust Jesus Christ It’s never awkward at His feet Wide-eyed, he listens and he prays to the One who saved him for all eternity

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Date: 7/19/2023 9:12:00 AM
Powerful imagery, Kim. I like it! Blessings, Kim M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2023 10:03:00 AM
Bless you too! Thank you, Kim!
Date: 7/18/2023 11:25:00 AM
What a story/write/ending. I enjoyed it. Enjoy your day.....................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2023 10:03:00 AM
Have a greta day, Paula! Thank you!

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