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The Ink Flows Black

The ink flows black across this page, as my pen becomes scribe to thought. Expressions which I try to gauge and translation now must be sought. What was asleep is stirred awake. The ink flows black across this page. What of this will my pen now make, like a key to unlock some cage? Perhaps the time has come of age for me to free the things I keep, the ink flows black across this page, as I let surface things once deep. Tell me, from where do these things come, as feelings with thoughts now engage? My pen is there to capture some, the ink flows black across this page.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/15/2011 11:45:00 AM
Very beautifully written! Very impressive write.
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Date: 12/8/2011 3:55:00 PM
This is so creative! It truly captures the emotions of writing.
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Date: 8/29/2011 8:21:00 PM
The ink flows so marvelously here, I love quaterns and you did a great job with the form :) I particularly like the third stanza, it is quite a release, these flowings of ink isn't it?
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Date: 8/29/2011 5:47:00 PM
A wonderful poem, well done, I too have asked myself " from where do these things come" and thanks for reading my poetry today.. Constance
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Date: 8/29/2011 5:41:00 PM
You made me think what would it be like to be the ink and not the creator.....deep thoughts stirred!!
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:56:00 PM
Keep it flowing Emma. This poem says so much. Where do these thoughts come from? How do we translate them into written word that makes a poem worth reading? Well you managed it here, no worries. A wonderful work. Thank you for your kind remarks on mine. best regards Margaret
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Date: 8/26/2011 1:47:00 AM
It comes from the heart 7up
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Date: 8/26/2011 1:46:00 AM
It comes from the heart 7up
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Date: 8/25/2011 4:17:00 PM
I wish my ink would flow that easily for I seem to be in a non writing mood at the moment. Nice poem you have penned. love phyl
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Date: 8/23/2011 10:39:00 PM
Cool poem invoking the imagery of a poet writing. I love your repeating line!!
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