The Initiation / N. A. Ruins Arizon 2001

The Shaman sat upon the sand,
the sand of ocher clay;
between the walls of ruins tall,
where ancient one did lay.

The sky above, the earth between;
took in his sincere plea
tinksha’s toned and soft flutes droned,
a mantras bold decree.

The desert heat rose like a fog,
around his folded form.
Assassin once and marked by death
today, he’d be reborn.

He’d been the light on darkened paths,
within the blackest night;
he’d be the dark now ‘mongst the glow,
of over awing light.

He had not seen, he had not known,
that ‘mongst the killers he;
had been the light, the kindest fright,
he’d been purity.

And now, upon this sacred path,
the path so golden bright;
he’d be the dark and fearsome soul
trudging toward the light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/9/2010 7:29:00 AM
intresting ...:) i guess a person have to take their Role .... :)) Well i hope you had a great holiday Queen Maya :)
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Date: 11/8/2009 11:44:00 PM
Thank you for your always welcome blog comment Debbie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/8/2009 5:24:00 PM
An amazing poem, Deborah! I haven't been in here since a long while, in truth after reading this piece, I can't understand why.:) Love the meter that pulls the reader along 'The Shaman's' path. You create and maintain a vivid scenario. I'm floored.:) Best to you and yours..Mikki
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