The Indentured Logger- Swap Quatrain

Ten doggone years I've sawed your trees.
I quit. I'll saw my own darn z's.
I'm done with blood and sweat and tears;
I've sawed your trees ten doggone years.

Right out that door I'm marching on.
No use to look, 'cause I'll be gone.
I'm done with aches and blisters, for
I'm marching on, right out that door.

I'll never feel this weary back,
Nor sleep in such a leaky shack;
I'll go and find a decent meal --
This weary back I'll never feel.

With some sweet girl we'll settle down
Two thousand miles west of town.
I and my mule, named Mr. Merl,
We'll settle down with some sweet girl.

I've lived in hell, Mad Merlin Green;
Now I, like you, am strong and mean.
Once shy and kind, now hear me yell;
Mad Merlin Green, I've lived in hell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Williams Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 3:15 AM
Isaiah congrats on your win....David
May Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:01 PM
congrats on your win Isaiah
Gorelick Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 12:10 PM
This made me smie..My dad wa a logger with all the aches and pains you describe. I love your rhyme. Congrats. BG
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Very original. Excellent meter. this one was smooth like butter in the way it sounded to my ear. Awesome rhyming. You are one of the few that used perfect and complete rhyme all the way through. Congrats on your win with this really fun poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 9:48 AM
This was a barrel of fun. Congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 4:52 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, isaiah
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:46 AM
emotive write.. 'grads on your award!.. huggs
Kayode Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:14 AM
A great work you did here , congrats Isaiah.
Chircop Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 1:28 AM
I really enjoyed the take -on on this story..It definitely describes hard -work followed by changes to a better future..Greatly penned!!
Flach Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 5:31 PM
I enjoyed this SQ very much. This is a difficult form to pull off with continuity and flow - but you managed to do it and entertain, as well. It should do well in the contest. Joe
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 5:19 PM
This great Isaiah. I'm sure you will do well in the contest...Tim
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