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Wisdom quotes of the  Great Kilgharrah ;

There is no right or wrong only what is and what isn’t

None of us can choose our destiny and none of us can escape it

 

                                                   

The Immortal Bellow Thunders

A time of strong demands from noble Kings
Chosen; mentor “The One” altering things
Stood by his side wholly subservience
In day’s dusk end and bend to his defence

That I mere prophet son of an angel
To honor these guardianship faithful
Shrouding magical powers to behold
Among the young, I never to grow old

Beyond the chambers heap Kilgharrah sleeps 
in a cave deep within the tower’s keep
A lone; Survivor of a thousand years
And a thousand more populace will fear

Deceived, imprisoned his bellow thunders
No one could free the world’s greatest wonder
To purge magic from the realm that admires
To sever burn in the heavenly fires

Whispers his name as he slumbers, “Emrys”
Warlock charmed by dragon’s lore and riddles
A wise, trusted counselor and brother
Destined to mentor and guard King Arthur



2/24/2017

Poetry Contest: Form I - Contest(with a theme)
 
Sponsored by: Broken Wings
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Poteet Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 10:01 PM
Great characterization, Eve. Blessings on your poetry and on your win.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 8:23 PM
I enjoyed reading about this character. This is very well written. Congratulations and blessings, Janis.
La France Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 3:03 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in my contest. .great image~
Dutta Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 6:09 AM
Congrats Eve to win. Hugs
Duncan Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 2:51 AM
Fantasy, love it. Good luck to winnng :)
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 9:21 AM
WOW Eve I love the immortal dragon theme you chose - such a descriptive poem and I loved the clip too - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Tremendous imagery. You took me to a magical place.
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 7:27 PM
GREAT job how you tied it in with this legend. I don't think I heard of it before. Fascinating, Eve!! Good luck in the contest. The theme Immortal is difficult for me. I will have to do some google searches to get ideas!
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:14 PM
You have had to seen "Merlin" series during King Arthur's reign fiction of course... at the end of the series they show Merlin in the future about 2000 still young awesome show. The series is on Netflix if you enjoy movies... Thank you for the compliment..
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 2:33 PM
Superb! A seven dear, Eve! Good luck!
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:15 PM
Thank you that means alot coming from you dear friend.
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 7:04 AM
Great poem ...
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:15 PM
Thank you :)
Green Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 6:46 AM
This was so good Eve, I hated to see it end. I was in that world via your words. Really nice, much luck in the contest
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:16 PM
Thank you, Chris, Hugs dear friend
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 3:29 AM
- A great theme with interesting logic, Eve - A poem that has a lot of wisdom and truth - Good luck in the contest - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:17 PM
Thank you so much Hugs
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