The Illusion Part 3

6.
What would he say what would he do if she told him?
How could she tell him that she had seen the sun rise and set in his eyes.
They were like the amber rays of  dawn and when passion came they
turned to soft sea foam. He was in her mind and she had to let him go. Did not know if she could stand the pain. The heart had been on fire full of desire. A part she was having trouble letting go.
7.
He watched in awe. He wanted to get to know this mysterious lady who came with the mist. This illusion so perfect yet so untouchable that he dare not breathe in case she disappeared. He could barely breathe  yet each of his breaths felt like her breath upon his face or maybe it was just the fine mist. He felt he was losing control and did not know what to do. He turned towards her as the mist rolled in and in the blink of an eye she was gone.
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Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 3:40 AM
- Maybe it an optical illusion that challenges his sense of reality ... - :)
Babcock Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Glad you enjoyed the story. love phyl
Callus Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 8:19 AM
The story has evolved the same as in the previous parts...mystifying. An obscure secret is waiting to unfold...I am now hooked and want more!! ~ Hugs // paul
Babcock Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Glad you found you wanted more to read. Hope the ending is good. love phyl
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