The Icing
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This Poem I wrote was used as the script for a commercial. They found me right here on poetrysoup. Greatness in the cards for us all. Sometimes we even get to lick the icing.
Please push the link below to watch the Commercial. I think they did an amazing job with my words.
Good Afternoon Maurice -
We wanted to make sure you got to see the final video we created with your poem as the script!
Please click the link below to check it out :)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/bbqqg7lg9sufeqp/Foundations_Overview_2017.mp4?dl=0
We hope you love it as much as we do!
FOUNDATION
“...we achieve true wholeness
by embracing our fragility...”
Jalaja Bonheim
FOUNDATION
i had
no script
no actors
no stage
instead let me direct this life
my life
stage the words
add a subtle dramatic tone
with fragility
once the foundation is built
i'll work on emotional recall
work in the layers
does it sing
does it dance
does it make you think
does it make you feel
you can design the most beautiful building in the world
but with no structure it will not stand
for this one i start with the word
"I"
yup that’s a keeper
next go out on a limb
"Love"
it can't be all about me
so i finish
with "You"
yes you
‘what happens when you open your heart?,
your inner strength becomes an outer foundation.’
Copyright © Maurice Yvonne | Year Posted 2018
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