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The Ice King

The  ice festival was well underway
magnificent sculptures everywhere
in the centre in pride of place
stood the Ice King looking regal
sparkling and glistening in the sun
yet if you lay your hand on him
a fiery burning pain sears your skin
he watches on unmoved by your pain
his heart only made of ice is unfeeling
he feels no emotions as he melts away  


07/25/2013 written for Ice King contest

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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/22/2013 12:51:00 PM Great uniquely creative winning work..Enjoyed reading it today..Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/22/2013 10:24:00 PM Sara you are so kind and inspiring ty Shadow x smiles

Danesh Morgan Date: 8/21/2013 4:53:00 PM very nice Congrats on your win. Morgan Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/22/2013 10:25:00 PM Danesh hi how are you? Ty so much Shadow x smiles

Barbara Gorelick Date: 8/19/2013 8:36:00 PM I like! congrats. BG Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/20/2013 2:47:00 PM hi Barbara and ty for liking it Shadow x smile

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/19/2013 6:11:00 PM I really like this one Shadow, congratulations! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/20/2013 2:47:00 PM Ty so much Richard hope all's well Shadow x smile

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/19/2013 5:01:00 PM Hello Shadow, , love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/20/2013 2:46:00 PM think of an ice cube sliding down your back lol ty Shadow x smile

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2013 2:20:00 PM - It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Shadow! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/20/2013 2:45:00 PM Hi Anne Lise yes it was and ty Shadow x smile

Skat A Date: 8/19/2013 2:05:00 PM SHADOW, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~ Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/20/2013 2:44:00 PM hi and ty Skat both for place and contest Shadow x smile

Laura Breidenthal Date: 7/26/2013 5:19:00 PM Very interesting one. Very well written. :) Always, Laura Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/27/2013 4:37:00 PM hi Laura Ty for visiting my work glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles

Jack Ellison Date: 7/26/2013 7:46:00 AM You melted this "Ice King's" heart! LOL Huggs, Jack xoxox Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/26/2013 11:40:00 AM hi Jack you an Ice King? never lol glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles

Betty Bateson Date: 7/25/2013 1:17:00 PM Unfeeling with no emotions. He is a cold one all right. Well done..... Betty Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/25/2013 4:17:00 PM hi Betty Ty for stopping in glad you like Shadow x smiles

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/25/2013 1:06:00 PM - It is fascinating and amazing to watch ice sculptures - Bravo, a very good poem for the contest Shadow - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/25/2013 4:18:00 PM hi Anne Lise and so nice of you to read very inspiring ty Shadow x smiles