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the ice cream truck

Driving down the road Giving ice cream to the kids Four wheels of deliciousness Really catchy tune I dont no how much it is Depends on what kind you get

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/14/2009 11:54:00 AM
its cute. . .i love it
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Date: 4/10/2009 3:46:00 PM
Its cute. . .i love it
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Date: 4/10/2009 1:15:00 PM
Interesting subject! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 4/10/2009 12:39:00 PM
this is creative and fun, Chris! thanks for welcome comments! jmg
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Date: 4/10/2009 3:10:00 AM
Chris, this is an excellent choka and reading it makes me feel the childishness in me, just awesome, enjoyed it! You may want to change... no? to know. Congrats on having it featured this week! Cheers, Ernesto
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Date: 4/9/2009 11:32:00 PM
Chris - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:42:00 PM
Yum, I want some ice cream! Congratulations on being featured this week. Always, Daneann
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Date: 4/7/2009 9:40:00 AM
Chris, this is a delicious write, congratulations on it being featured today. Love always
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Date: 4/7/2009 9:00:00 AM
The kid in me loves this one. Congrats. Love, daver
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Date: 4/6/2009 5:09:00 PM
"Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha"
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:26:00 PM
I am learning so many new forms today! You really do this one well. I like the memories this one brings to mind and since I still have young children at home it is an awesome image of what summer will bring. Yummy! great write! Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:05:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2009 3:58:00 AM
Hi Chris, first, congratulations, second, I like this Choka form, short but meaningful. Keep on posting. Ernilando
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Date: 4/2/2009 8:49:00 PM
lol like this thought. love and peace
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Date: 4/2/2009 8:16:00 PM
Wow, nice choka Chris, your poetic range is growing...Raul
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