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The Ice Cream Stick

Flavored water sticking on wooden stick Its luscious top is so tasteful to lick Like bar of sultry heaven I've been craving since seven Tender hearts are caught in its magic trick 2nd place

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/29/2023 3:57:00 PM

what a sweet poem, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

R. B. Cawis
Date: 7/30/2023 4:19:00 PM

Thank you very much...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2023 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara

R. B. Cawis
Date: 7/23/2023 6:59:00 PM

Thank you very much... Way to go...

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/23/2023 9:25:00 AM

Sweet limerick Roger. Congratulations! :)

R. B. Cawis
Date: 7/23/2023 6:59:00 PM

Thank you very much...

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/22/2023 6:26:00 PM

Good one, Roger! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

R. B. Cawis
Date: 7/23/2023 7:00:00 PM

Thank you very much... Blessings...

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/22/2023 4:45:00 PM

Roger, congratulations on your winning placement, a cute limerick!

R. B. Cawis
Date: 7/23/2023 7:00:00 PM

Thank you very much dear...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/19/2023 7:40:00 AM

This is mouth-watering, Roger:)

R. B. Cawis
Date: 7/19/2023 9:01:00 PM

Thank you very much...