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With apologies to Eugene O'Neill and all those of good taste.

“Your cone's so thick, can I have a lick?” (Bill, surprised, dropped his wad on the brick!) Not any vanilla, nary a scintilla, did poor Susie’s sweet tongue get to flick.

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Date: 7/23/2023 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara
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Date: 7/23/2023 5:01:00 AM
Ben, congratulations on your winning placement with your bawdy and creative limerick!
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Date: 7/22/2023 6:49:00 PM
Ben, congrats on your win with this naughty limerick! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/22/2023 7:08:00 PM
Thank you—I’d no idea a decision was even made until I read your comment

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