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The Hushed Tone Of Her Love

 
Lived it Like a daydream  Sunlit! Faintly Floated - Befell Quaintly. A note Scented in love She wrote. Maurice Yvonne 11~28~2014 Sponsor: nette onclaud Contest Name: WHISPERS OF A MUSE
                                

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Date: 1/13/2015 5:02:00 PM
:) Muses are lovely, are they not? She certainly visited you on this one, my dear. Congrats. Thanks for your visits of late....They have been a boost. Hugs
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Date: 12/9/2014 12:49:00 PM
Your muse inspire you each time If you write with or without rhyme. She enjoy the inner melody of your gorgious poetry.
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Date: 12/7/2014 11:02:00 PM
Beautiful, Maurice, like a daydream sunlit!! Congrats to you...Thanks for the sweet comments for my son. You made his day! He's now telling me he's a better writer than I am. I agreed with him of course. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/6/2014 11:43:00 PM
Truly Maurice, way to go ,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 12/4/2014 11:07:00 PM
I love this. Awesome. God bless you with love and prayers, gina
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Date: 12/4/2014 7:28:00 PM
Just for the first verse alone, i LOVE this one. Anything sunlit will wow me! Congrats. It is a delight seeing this one again.
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Date: 12/4/2014 4:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning write Maurice!
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Date: 12/4/2014 2:48:00 AM
ohh, love this Maurice! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:06:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Maurice
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:35:00 PM
Ah...the scent of love...may we all be lucky enough to catch a whiff...congrats Maurice
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:47:00 AM
Hi Maurice, like mine your poem is attractively scented. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:42:00 AM
now, you do make me blush, Maurice... such a dreamy read!..thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats!
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:47:00 AM
You were right Maurice. Frederic had whisper in his title and placed. I still like the new title. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:34:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/30/2014 10:27:00 AM
It's beautiful and I think I do see at least one of the places where you changed it. I really like the way you renamed it! this one better do great in the contest!!
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:06:00 AM
A nice one Maurice, Wishing you luck. ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/29/2014 10:07:00 PM
Lovely.How I love your last three lines Maurice.
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Date: 11/29/2014 8:42:00 PM
the title with whispers was better of course, but I just wanted you to be safe. Silly rules are killing us!! and I am one who also makes people follow rules!!! hahaha. The problem is she did not say to keep the word out of the "body" of the poem. I will go check again but if she had said that, I would have had no qualms.
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:53:00 PM
beautifully penned my friend:-) good luck:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/29/2014 7:59:00 AM
Wow Maurice brilliant take! Note scented in love u wrote is a very lovely thought! Gl in contest!
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Date: 11/28/2014 10:36:00 PM
This is sure a sweet one, Maurice. Do you think it is ok to use whisper in the title. I was not clear on her rules when she said not to use the word whispers in our poem. I have written one of these but I do not like it so much. will try to post it tomorrow. you kept very nicely to the theme!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/29/2014 6:19:00 AM
I took the word whisper out of the title just in case. However if you read the instructions literally it clearly says not to use the word whisper in the body of the poem and only in the body of the poem. I just would rather not be completely disqualified.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/28/2014 11:08:00 PM
I also understood not to use the word. The title must tie in with the poem though.
Date: 11/28/2014 9:52:00 PM
Lovely write, Maurice. Good luck on the contest. eve 7
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