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The hunter who became the prey

There was a hunter, who lived for game. His mind was strong, but thoughts were lame. He met a deer, who changed his life. She stabbed his heart, with a hunting knife. The mighty hunter, became the prey. He lost his heart, in a game he played. He never thought, the day would come. For a mighty hunter, to be a bum. To those who hunt, and do the same. A deers feelings, are not a game. An honest man, should be sincere. A deers heart, to him is dear.

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Date: 7/22/2024 11:05:00 AM
Hello Saleh, I believe that when an animals being hunted that it is for food. I say this for a reason. some hunters kill a deer a bear and leave the bodies there where it lays. Their babies do not have a mother. that is so sad. Some hunters cut the head of the animals and hang them on the wall. I don't like that. Enjoy your day my frikend. /Darlene./
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Date: 7/22/2024 2:34:00 PM
Hello Saleh, Thank you Saleh. Oh! Yes i see your point Yew Saleh, many men do this to women. You hid your words well m y friend. Your welcome my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 7/22/2024 11:20:00 AM
Hello Darlene, You are right and have a valid point of view. However, there is a twist to this poem and I was referring to men who chase women for fun and pleasure, regardless of their emotions. Which is as bad as killing animals for fun. No offense to anyone. I wanted my words to be hidden rather than in plain sight. Thank you my friend. Saleh

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