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The Hunter

A cat is in the yard While walking smells the ground He is searching for a mouse The cat is hungry His head is bent to the ground He is trying to catch a m pouse

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/5/2025 9:16:00 AM

As you know, I have had 11 cats since 1970It just so happened I lved in the cityin the city and there were no mice in my house. I do know that a mouse is the.a number one protein for cats to eat. That nonsense in a bag is very bad for them and their kidneys and could kill them especially the Males. I don’t know anyone here who had a cat for any long time except you.. and I. Pangie. Cats do not exist to fulfill our Expectations.Pangie

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2025 11:51:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, Right cats do exist to fill our expectations. I would never let my cat go near a mouse. I took good care of my cat. We had a strong bond. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/17/2025 8:32:00 AM

Magnificent creatures, hunters by nature. I get a kick out of watching birds dive-bomb the local feral when he goes on daily patrol. Great expression! Thank you, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2025 9:58:00 AM

Hello Joe DiMino, i like to watch the bird dive bomb the cat. Y9ou think the cat would get the idea not to bother the bird. Happy Easter. my friend. /Darlene/

David Crandall

Date: 4/16/2025 3:03:00 PM

I like to watch a cat hunt - so much focus

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/16/2025 3:47:00 PM

Hello David Crandall, yes the cat does focus on the prey. I saw the cat eat the mouse. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2025 1:02:00 AM

I have had many cats and none ever cared about hunting mice. I saw one time my cat ignored a mouse. But I hear stories of people using cats to catch mice. I guess you have seen that kind!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/11/2025 9:49:00 AM

Hello Andrea, I have seen this cat i named Hunter catch a mouse and eat it. k think he is a stray. What breed is your cat? Hugs. /Darlene/

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/10/2025 4:40:00 PM

clean , flowing lines give this write its distinct, charming feel...well done, darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/11/2025 9:50:00 AM

Hello Nette, Oh, thank you for this wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/9/2025 4:02:00 AM

Indeed Darlene, you've captured the "Hunter" capabilities of a cat! I enjoyed your poem this morning! Happy Wednesday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/9/2025 10:11:00 AM

Hello Mike, Thank you Mike. I watched the cat eat a mouse. I think he is a stray. Happy Wednesday. xxxxxx-ooooooo./Darlene/

Alesia Leach

Date: 4/8/2025 5:22:00 PM

This is so beautifully simple. You capture the cat’s hunger and focus so well--it’s almost as if we, too, feel that need to seek, to survive. The repetition gives it such a rhythmic pulse, like the cat’s pursuit, never quite reaching, but always searching. I loved how you brought the primal instincts to life in just a few lines. And I’m so sorry for your loss of your cat. My heart goes out to you during this difficult time.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/9/2025 10:09:00 AM

Hello Alesia, Thank you Alesia, I miss Sparkles. It has been a month since she is gone. I feel lost without her. I watched that cat sneak up on that mouse , then watched him eat it. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/8/2025 3:34:00 PM

Wonderful sedoka, Darlene:-) I enjoyed reading.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/9/2025 10:03:00 AM

Hello Edward, thank you for the lovely comment. blessing my friend.. /Darlene/

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/8/2025 12:10:00 PM

Cats are great hunters. Loved the way you built the poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/8/2025 2:53:00 PM

Hello Victor, oh, thank you Victor.Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/8/2025 11:51:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun "The Hunter" write. I can see the cute cat before me. Did he get dinner??? Have a wonderful day writing away................

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/8/2025 2:54:00 PM

Hello Paula, Yes he did get dinner. he ate the mouse. Hugs. /Darlene/

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/8/2025 8:52:00 AM

Dear Darlene! I loved your poem! The simplicity and charm of your words perfectly capture the cat's determination and instincts. I can totally picture that little hunter prowling around, nose to the ground, ready for the chase. It’s such a relatable moment and those everyday adventures of our furry friends! Delightful! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/8/2025 10:10:00 AM

Hello Daniel Henry, Thank you for the lovely comment. He is a cute little kitty. I think he was a stray searching for food. I watched him catch the mouse, then eat it. Spring blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/8/2025 7:14:00 AM

They sure can be hunters! You described it well Darlene. Have a nice day. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/8/2025 10:06:00 AM

Hello Heidi, Yes i am sure they are hunters. Hugs /Darlene/

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/8/2025 3:44:00 AM

so nice and well observed, enjoyed

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/8/2025 10:04:00 AM

Hello Yann Rolland, Thank you for this wonderful comment. I think Hunter was a stray. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Jay Narain

Date: 4/6/2025 10:38:00 AM

Nice poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/7/2025 9:48:00 AM

Hello Jay, nice to see you. Thank you for this lovely comment. i think Hunter[I named him] is a stray. He is so cute. Enjohy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2025 10:36:00 AM

- He is doing his job well, Darlene :) - Hope you had a great weekend :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/7/2025 9:45:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, Yes Hunter is doing his job well. Yes I did have a good weekend. i am getting over aq bad cold. Feeling better today. Hugs. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 4/6/2025 1:23:00 AM

Hello Darlene this is a lovely piece. Riminds of a TV programme I used to watch.(Tom and Jerry) Wishing you a wonderful day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/6/2025 10:22:00 AM

Hello Zyrool, This cat in my yard was jumping around turning this way and that. i saw him catch the mouse and eat it. i think Hunter I named him{ is a stray. thank you for this wonderful commeent. Hugs. /Darlene/