The Hunt

Slithering through the moonlit field
A  tiger king’s paws grow heavy, but silent;
Eyes burning green in the darkened shadows
While  its tail curls quietly back and forth
As if to guard an environ  of wildlife,
The breeze caressing  a feline’s strong fur
On a night gentle as its movement, lithe .

Ears alert through the stillness  of the grass,
The  beast picks  up an unfamiliar sound,
A quiver among thistles, a crawl along new leaves
Smelling   danger  alive in the  humid mist…
Then, one click. A second thud , how quick!
Until hunters draw nearer signalling a fire
Of rifles in breaking blasts and  roars…

It’s body arched till limbs wobble
Yet steadily, the king rises, leaping into the air;
That with a final pounce and agile crush,
Hunters become the game… mangled , dragged
In a territory where man is the outsider, 
Forgetting the power  of nature’s  rites.



11/5/2016
For Casarah Nance: The Hunt Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 5:12 AM
Great write and win...Congrats
Black Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Amazing work with some great wording and powerful thought. Nice choice for the contest. Congratulation.
Rycroft Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 4:04 AM
Congrats well-done great poem x
Walker Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 12:01 AM
Nette, a beautiful and well-written poem. Congratulations on your placement. ~ Sonia
Nance Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Awesomely descriptive! Congrats on a win, this was great to read!
Poet Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 11:42 AM
Beautiful poem Nette!How are you?
Gupta Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 6:33 AM
Absorbing read while stopping at the subtle wonders like at 'the breeze caressing a feline’s strong fur/ on a night gentle as its movement, lithe ' ... great work ...
Vaso Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 8:27 PM
I love to see the table turned, very well done, and as usual beautiful poem!
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 7:43 PM
oh good, another one where nature turns on a crazy hunter. I love that, Nette. JOseph may did a good one with that kind of theme too. this should do very well in the contest.
Turner Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 7:20 PM
Great story, nette. I'm not really a fan of hunting for sport. If someone is going to eat what they kill that's a different thing to me. It's just the way I was raised. I don't think people eat tiger meat, so in this case the hunter got what he deserved. Good luck!
Ball Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Excellent Nette. Very gripping tale with great imagery. Have to admit nature lover that I am I was rooting for the tiger. I hate people who hunt for fun. Great job and good luck in the contest. God Bless and a seven from me. JB
Em Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Though man is born with a survival instinct unfortunately too often hunting is for the thrill without remorse. Top-of-the-line poetry!
Datu Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 4:18 PM
The twists and turns of this extraordinary poem are arresting. Man can always be the beast. Rated 7 +
P  Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Turnabout is fair play, difference is the tiger won't stuff and mount them just for sport. Vivid imagery Nette, I could sense the fear in the aftermath. Good luck, this is a definite contender! 7+
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 3:20 PM
- I could never kill an animal, but I eat meat - A wonderful poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 1:50 PM
This was fantastic Nette. I felt like I was there, up in a tree watching all of this unfold. I got a sick feeling in my stomach when the guns fired but cheered when the jungle beast showed them who was king. Really well done my friend.
Stover Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Beautifully written with provoking imagery. You have a great talent. Keep writing.
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