The Hummingbird

The humming bird comes to the hibiscus again
 Frozen in light like a drop of rain
And sticks its sweet tongue into her red throat
 Sucking to its breast while minutes float
The silence of the nectars power
 The magic of the evening hour.

The humming bird's feathers fracture light
And from its single shade colors bright
Spill against the praise of the eye, radiate
Truth found in the simple and inviolate
Visible where invisible is stored
Beauty rinses thirst where love is poured.

The humming bird transfigured in our hope
Flits upon the sense, a symbol in scope
More vast than our national desire
To fan our wings and fracture the fire
A thing of truth from beauty grows
And beauty never without its graces glows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/25/2009 8:53:00 AM
I like your line about hummingbirds and hope because their tiny packages of energy and beauty give the feeling of hope too. Nice use of imagery for an uplifting view. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments. I appreciate your encouragement. Karen
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Date: 5/20/2009 1:54:00 PM
mmm!!!! rich and caloric! nice! L'nass!!! and thanks for comments!!! Jim
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Date: 5/6/2009 6:53:00 PM
ah! the humming bird, interesting perspective.have a look at my one and compare.
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:13:00 AM
Beautifully constructed and rendered... subtle couplet rhyming and flow. Such colourful phrasing and imagery! Well done L'nass!! Best wishes, Keith
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