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The House of the Dead

At the doorstep the little girl sits Misled by a false hope Daddy will come soon And gather into his arms his sweet dove What will he bring for her today? A flower? A bar of chocolate? The young wife grows silent as the night Grief pouring out of her eyes Her youth, her dreams lost Just like that, in a flash Wishing she could be like the little girl Too young to understand death and demise Shuzbee wonders why his master aint home yet His wagging tail drops down His ears alert to pick up the silliest sound Its time to play fetch Shouldn’t master be walking up the path right now? Flattening the grass? A silence hangs over the house Death eminent from a mile away The air is heavy Deprived of breath A step into the house of the deceased And you feel the chill of the dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/21/2016 6:42:00 PM
varenya raina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:38:00 PM
VARENYA, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 4/2/2014 9:56:00 PM
I am well, busy at work but still finding time for family and friends.
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Date: 4/2/2014 11:54:00 AM
Good morning, I hope all is well with you.
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Varenya Raina
Date: 4/2/2014 1:44:00 PM
Hello! Havent been able to write anything lately! :( Busy with college and all...How are you doing?
Date: 3/8/2014 1:16:00 PM
Well done... Enjoyed reading this one... Verlena
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Varenya Raina
Date: 3/8/2014 1:43:00 PM
thankyou verlena s. walker! :)
Date: 3/8/2014 1:01:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, let me know when you post a new poem.
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Varenya Raina
Date: 3/8/2014 1:43:00 PM
sure! :)
Date: 3/7/2014 12:29:00 PM
I can feel the atmosphere; grief hanging heavily on the air...and yet...
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Varenya Raina
Date: 3/7/2014 12:30:00 PM
Thankyou! I really appreciate you reading it and commenting! :)
Date: 3/7/2014 12:25:00 PM
Wow, three perspective. This is brilliantly expressed! Well done once again.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2014 1:06:00 PM
If you have time, come check out my poems I would appreciate hearing your thoughts.
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Varenya Raina
Date: 3/7/2014 12:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot for your kind comments! :)

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