The House of the Dead

At the doorstep the little girl sits
Misled by a false hope
Daddy will come soon
And gather into his arms his sweet dove
What will he bring for her today?
A flower? A bar of chocolate?

The young wife grows silent as the night
Grief pouring out of her eyes
Her youth, her dreams lost 
Just like that, in a flash
Wishing she could be like the little girl
Too young to understand death and demise

Shuzbee wonders why his master aint home yet
His wagging tail drops down
His ears alert to pick up the silliest sound
Its time to play fetch
Shouldn’t master be walking up the path right now?
Flattening the grass?

A silence hangs over the house
Death eminent from a mile away
The air is heavy
Deprived of breath
A step into the house of the deceased
And you feel the chill of the dead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 21, 2016 at 6:42 PM
varenya raina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 6:38 PM
VARENYA, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
Lamoureux Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 9:56 PM
I am well, busy at work but still finding time for family and friends.
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April 2, 2014 at 11:54 AM
Good morning, I hope all is well with you.
Raina Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 1:44 PM
Hello! Havent been able to write anything lately! :( Busy with college and all...How are you doing?
Walker  Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Well done... Enjoyed reading this one... Verlena
Raina Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 1:43 PM
thankyou verlena s. walker! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Thanks for the visit, let me know when you post a new poem.
Raina Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 1:43 PM
sure! :)
Callus Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 12:29 PM
I can feel the atmosphere; grief hanging heavily on the air...and yet...
Raina Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 12:30 PM
Thankyou! I really appreciate you reading it and commenting! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Wow, three perspective. This is brilliantly expressed! Well done once again.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 1:06 PM
If you have time, come check out my poems I would appreciate hearing your thoughts.
Raina Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 12:31 PM
Thanks a lot for your kind comments! :)
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