The House Is Big and Beautiful

Cliffs aren’t dangerous
until you make them sharp
with shadows and wild waves…

The woods is peaceful
until it hoots and howls
chills up the spine…

The house is big and beautiful
until the weeping willows are old
and its secrets are slowly divulged…

The breeze-like sound of the sea
holds lively hearts
until they be stilled…

The knife is productive
as it carves a pumpkin’s features
until flames fuel perdition…

Superstition is innocuous
until the innocent
are burned at the stake…

Stick figures -
embers of the erroneous
history of shadows…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 12:16 AM
"Superstition is innocuous until the innocent are burned at the stake"… This I love the most. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:09 AM
Thank you, Valsa! Glad you liked that part. Blessings!
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 7:41 PM
And the truth is always welcome --- until it's told about me!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:10 AM
LOL! Be careful what you wish for, right?!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 4:48 PM
An enjoyable write, wakes the dawn like fumbling fingers, making the alarmed coo-coo. Faving... Aloha
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:11 AM
You are too funny, William! Bless you!
Hind Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 3:53 PM
I love every part of this, Kim. A fav
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:11 AM
Thank you so much, Paige! <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 3:48 PM
I appreciate your contrasts, vivid and truthful.....well written poem, Kim. Faving
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Thank you, Sara! I saw a memory photo on my FB page. It was of the house that was used in the TV soap, Dark Shadows. I used to watch when I was a kid.
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