The House Awakes

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Paying attention to our, as in this case, my surroundings. We spend too much time looking straight ahead, focussed on where are we going, what will we be doing? Look around stop staring at the ground.

The morning stroll from room to room
Photos and paintings adorn the walls
Smile and stop, family groups, happy and sad
The camera captures good and bad

My laughter rings out, memories surface
Weddings and celebrations captured on film
Moments in time, thoughts drift elsewhere
Faces so lifelike include those no longer here

Say a greeting then move on
Study paintings, such amazing detailed scenery
The early morning stillness of an empty house
Climb the stairs, upstairs awaits its turn

Photos of older members of the family
All acknowledged with utmost respect
Sounds of breathing, realised it is your own
The stairs are a challenge, you should have known

The end of a pathway reached for today
Retraced steps, ready for daily frays
Stand at the front door as I have many times before
Listening to the house waking from its slumber

Creaks and groans, a breeze from who knows where
My laughter erupts, memories of loved ones
Stop, listen, enjoy sounds we usually do not hear
Life’s hustle and bustle awaits, onward and upward

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Date: 12/12/2022 9:35:00 AM
The first work of yours evoked feelings of melancholy and promise. In the stillness of the morning our hearts long for the same stillness to the risk to appreciate and even to mourn our past loves and memories. Thank you, John, and Welcome.
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John A'Hern
Date: 12/13/2022 1:24:00 AM
Hi Kevin, thank you for your comment. As we move through life and from house to house, we leave behind memories that follow us forever.
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