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The House

The house, sailing on the boathouse, trains are in the roundhouse, I served jury duty in the courthouse. I played with dolls in the dollhouse, my husband is in the doghouse, I never want to visit the jailhouse, flowers filled the greenhouse. Date Written:6/17/2021 Note: It has been a very, very long day/week and it shows here. Laugh a little......... 3 Place Workshop: Adjectives Deleted Contest Judged 7/11/2021 Sponsored by: Jack Webster

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/13/2021 7:04:00 PM

Hello Paula, I really enjoyed your entry. It was very imaginative the way you corralled so many 'houses.' Just great! Congratulations! I hope better weeks lie ahead. Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/14/2021 2:37:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you enjoyed this cute/funny write. Have a blessed day..................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/12/2021 2:17:00 AM

Beautiful creation. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2021 10:24:00 AM

Thanks for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this funny write. Have a blessed day/week..................

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/12/2021 1:42:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2021 10:23:00 AM

Thanks for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you enjoyed my funny write. Have a blessed day/week..................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2021 11:09:00 AM

a cute one on different types of houses, for sure!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed my cute/silly write. It had been a very, very long day/week. I was at the end of my rope when I wrote this. Guess I needed a "Laugh" so I wrote it down. Have a blessed day.........................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/18/2021 11:02:00 AM

Enjoyed the humor Paula. Cleverly done!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2021 9:43:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed my humor/funny/silly write. Have a blessed day/week.........................

Paul Callus

Date: 6/18/2021 3:25:00 AM

Fortunately it's the end of the week, Paula :) Time to put your legs up and enjoy a deserved rest....and forget all about "housework" :) Warm regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2021 10:49:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this funny/silly write. You are so right. I need to call it a week, put my legs up and let the world go by. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/17/2021 7:09:00 PM

Excellent humor Paula, you miss few houses, though:) thanks for putting a grin on my face. Blessings and regards.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2021 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad my funny/silly write put a grin on your face. It have been a hard/rough week. I love to make people smile/laugh. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/17/2021 6:09:00 PM

A nice light-hearted write, Paula! Hope tomorrow's a better day for you! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2021 10:44:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun/silly write. It have been a hard/rough week. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/17/2021 2:27:00 PM

Lol, didn't realise there were so many houses Paula, hope you're keeping well. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2021 10:43:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Yes, many houses. Glad you like this fun write. I am well and blessed. I hope are also well and blessed. Have a blessed day/weekend...................