The Hour of the Flower

In the hour
Of the Flower

Four o'clock
Petals unlock

Late day bloomer
Never sooner

Bright pink color
Makes you wonder

Is sleeping in
Really a sin

When brief display
Takes breath away



*  Many years ago my mother planted "four o'clocks" in the backyard.  Although she is gone now, 
these flowers awaken every afternoon to remind me how much she loved them.

For Linda-Marie's "Flower Power" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Boy Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Nature is nice,(Baby boy)
Orschell Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 5:20 PM
Good luck in the contest...It's an amazing poem. -Destiny
Gorelick Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 4:47 PM
LNC..you are so clever. I am not familiar with the "four o'clocks" but I wish I were. Congrats to you from your pal..BG
Sweetheart Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 3:45 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your success in my flower power contest... with this touching write ..thankxxx for your kind support..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Brown Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 11:46 AM
~~~Magnificent~~~Carolyn. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Good luck with your flower power, may there come a shower. Smile! Nothing ripe or ready to eat yet, but when there is your are welcome to sample the garden veggies. Agape, Moses
M Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 7:25 PM
Clever, cute and joyful. I can relate to this lolligagger's enjoyment of sleeping late. When the princess flower wishes grace us with her presence, I can almost hear her loud, but feminine yawn as she unfolds her petals with a far reaching, first stretch of the day! Rise and shine, sleepyhead!
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 7:07 PM
This is really great, Carolyn. To write about such unique flowers. yes, I will be tuned in to Idol tonight!! I wish the kid would finally go home. haha. LUv, andrea
Richards Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Delightful poem, Carolyn!!! Oh ...I do see this in the winner's circle. And as an added note...."four oclocks" were my one of my Grandma's favorites too!! But then she had many favorites:)
Culverhouse Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 5:06 PM
they will take over the yard too!! My mom had some that did...
Fraser Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 4:18 PM
Carolyn, i just think its wonderful that natures clock can be a reminder of someone so loved. Beautiful poem >> James
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