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The Hour of the Flower

In the hour Of the Flower Four o'clock Petals unlock Late day bloomer Never sooner Bright pink color Makes you wonder Is sleeping in Really a sin When brief display Takes breath away * Many years ago my mother planted "four o'clocks" in the backyard. Although she is gone now, these flowers awaken every afternoon to remind me how much she loved them. For Linda-Marie's "Flower Power" contest

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Date: 4/27/2010 9:25:00 AM
Nature is nice,(Baby boy)
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Date: 4/22/2010 5:20:00 PM
Good luck in the contest...It's an amazing poem. -Destiny
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Date: 4/22/2010 4:47:00 PM
LNC..you are so clever. I am not familiar with the "four o'clocks" but I wish I were. Congrats to you from your pal..BG
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Date: 4/22/2010 3:45:00 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your success in my flower power contest... with this touching write ..thankxxx for your kind support..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:46:00 AM
~~~Magnificent~~~Carolyn. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:05:00 AM
Good luck with your flower power, may there come a shower. Smile! Nothing ripe or ready to eat yet, but when there is your are welcome to sample the garden veggies. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/21/2010 7:25:00 PM
Clever, cute and joyful. I can relate to this lolligagger's enjoyment of sleeping late. When the princess flower wishes grace us with her presence, I can almost hear her loud, but feminine yawn as she unfolds her petals with a far reaching, first stretch of the day! Rise and shine, sleepyhead!
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Date: 4/21/2010 7:07:00 PM
This is really great, Carolyn. To write about such unique flowers. yes, I will be tuned in to Idol tonight!! I wish the kid would finally go home. haha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/21/2010 6:00:00 PM
Delightful poem, Carolyn!!! Oh ...I do see this in the winner's circle. And as an added note...."four oclocks" were my one of my Grandma's favorites too!! But then she had many favorites:)
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Date: 4/21/2010 5:06:00 PM
they will take over the yard too!! My mom had some that did...
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:18:00 PM
Carolyn, i just think its wonderful that natures clock can be a reminder of someone so loved. Beautiful poem >> James
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