The Hostage

I dream beyond these battlements 
Of islands in the west 
Beyond the strings and sacraments 
That occupy the rest

My gentle sister, soft and pure 
Admires her silken sleeves 
A subtle breeze begins to stir 
The eucalyptus leaves 

And like the leaves that tremble so 
My mind will dance toward 
A distant archipelago 
Or ships that I may board 

And though the only ship I meet 
Is drawn upon a page,
In books or verses I repeat  
These thoughts I can't assuage 

I dance in sprays of golden flowers 
That sprout along a stream
I walk along the shore for hours 
Til night begins to gleam 

For I'm too young to marry now 
But houses will decree 
I ask the wind to try, somehow, 
to take me to the sea



-For Isaiah Zerbst's 'Edmund Blair Leighton' contest and inspired by his painting with the same title
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horstkotter Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 7:30 PM
Very nice write. Well done.
Bacha Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Good for you , congratulation Jeremy, you have it, i feel it......Love Terry a 7>>
Bacha Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Good for you , congratulation Jeremy, you have it, i feel it......Love Terry a 7>>
Macfarlane Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 6:07 AM
Excellent write Jeremy! Big congrats on your win. Hugs
A   Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 9:31 PM
Congratulations, with your winning poem Jeremy , I'm also stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 2:45 PM
this one was excellent and I am very glad you made the list. Congrats to you, Jeremy.
Martin Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 12:48 PM
Andrea, thank you
Squyres Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 1:12 PM
Wonderful rhythmic flow in your poem !! Congrats on your win !! I really enjoyed this one !!
Martin Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 12:48 PM
Thank you, Debra!
Ober Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 11:07 AM
Awesome job, Jeremy! Very well-deserving win. I especially love the fourth verse.
Martin Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Thanks a bunch, Heather ;) !!
Burch Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 3:35 AM
Congratulations Jeremy!! Well done. Hugs Deb
Martin Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Thanks, Deborah!!
Zerbst Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 7:19 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest! It is nice to know that others are inspired by Edmund's awesome paintings. I can tell that you put a lot of time into making this a great poem, and I admire that.
Martin Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 12:47 PM
I enjoyed writing it a lot, a belated thank you!!
Pettit Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 11:27 PM
So good, I find it hard to believe this writing is original.
Martin Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 6:28 AM
Wow, that's a really nice compliment. I assure you it is, though.
Harper Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 2:36 PM
Jeremy, lovely quatrain, I imagine myself reading off on a voyage in this poem.
Martin Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 6:28 AM
Thank you!! Me, too. We can be co captains on the S.S. Soup
Jones Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 7:03 PM
This is like a Robert Frost poem...very grand......Donna
Martin Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 11:30 PM
Wow! What a comparison! :D
Bauer Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 9:11 AM
you really know how to nail the rhyme and rhythm in your poems and they flow so beautifully! i really love this one...
Martin Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 11:29 PM
Ilene, thank you. Same for your lovely poems!
Moreno Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 12:57 AM
Nice work, best of luck in the contest...
Martin Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 11:29 PM
Thanks, Raul
Chircop Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 12:15 AM
This is the kind of poetry I like..Lovely
Martin Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 11:28 PM
Thanks, Charmaine ;)
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 9:30 PM
wow, you are amazing with this one. I will have to look at that hostage picture again. How interesting that you and I both posted today our poems for this challenge!!
Martin Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 9:46 PM
And thank you!
Martin Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 9:44 PM
It was a challenge, for sure. I wrestled with this one..was kinda like a baby alligator.
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