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The Hoof Choice

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Written: November 07, 2023 ____________________________________________ Am I condoning a state of affluence? In recent desultory decadence Have I drawn a swan dive of choice? Don't you hear your mom clamoring? Don't you grasp her voice? Backward between and beyond riverstone? Holler—herald hidden phylum, hunt voice of failed fulfillments The hind hock hoof is hermitic. With any accismus to anthropomorphize beasts Winter wolf moon wakes up her litter for sustenance, the man in me would slaughter the wolf. Tracks—that permeate darkness their compulsory murder. Everyone needs  a meal drifted and whistled from hair to heel, things outside seem odd, ghostly, surreal. Amid snow—hooves slowed to soak in across the waves—why my soul seeped a sailor has been seen dozing off whilst the riverside weeps trust—my footprints feature fear—cynicism.

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Date: 11/8/2023 12:55:00 AM
Fear cynicism, that ending! Soul hitting really! Dear sotto this has a very powerful and soul stirring voice that conveys so many thoughts in a profound and impeccable manner! I absolutely love the way you’ve written this! Especially the alliterations as well as your word pairing is so unique and creative! I especially love “ things outside seem odd, ghostly, surreal.“ and “ a sailor has been seen dozing off whilst the riverside weeps” thought provoking and so deeply moving! Eloquently deliverd
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Date: 11/7/2023 5:00:00 PM
Excellent poetry, my friend. Your voice is so unique, and you excel in so many different poetic forms. I always enjoy reading your poetry, and then enjoy the thoughts it provokes in me. Thanks for the challenges you bring me and the blessing from your wisdom. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 11/7/2023 3:56:00 PM
another powerful creation, dear Sotto. The last two lines especially spoke to me. I like the reference to the winter wolf moon...The mood in your poem seemed almost surreal with twinges of some serious thoughts and questions. Your rhyme scheme was exquisite and flowing, captivating at every turn. Your poetic voice is truly unique and inspirational. I appreciate your creativity, Sara
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