The Homeless Man

The Homeless Man


When the wind blows off the water
With it’s icy reminder that it’s growing late 
He puts his head down, pulls his scarf tighter
And once again pondered his fate.

It seems he thinks more clearly
When out where the elements rule
They have no respect for his trials
They know how daily life can be cruel.

The leaves are dancing beside him
The dust swirls in some modern dance
He wants to take part in the movement
Consider giving life one more chance.

He’s had constant daily rejections
But some how he’s coped with defeat
He still clings to a hope for tomorrow
This new dawn he reluctantly greets.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 12/11/2024 8:09:00 AM
Very good write. Enjoyed reading this. Thank you
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Date: 11/21/2008 8:56:00 AM
The rhyme within this is perfect and graceful while the imagery presents itself so clearly for a very good understanding and perspective of this mans daily life. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 11/21/2008 7:02:00 AM
You have a wonderful way of observing and writing about the things you see around you. When I was a boy, I used to go for long walks along the river bank and, regularly met an old traveller. Having never paid attention to mum's advice not to talk to strangers, I regularly shared my lunch with him. His name was 'Blue', a nickname he acquired in the war, and he was a real poet. Can still see his face now (though it was mostly beard!). Love, Nigel
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