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The Homeless

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Old creaking in the floors is calling out to me, A whisper of the past in shadows softly cast, Four walls are all invisible; my mind still can see. The kitchen’s warmth, where laughter used to be, The bedroom holds the dreams that time has over-passed, Old creaking in the floors is calling out to me. In every corner, memories swirl like leaves in spree, The den, a silent witness to the moments amassed, Four walls are all invisible; my mind still can see. Wrapped in a hoodie, lost in reverie, I trace the fading echoes, their hold steadfast, Old creaking in the floors is calling out to me. Head on my backpack, thoughts like waves at sea, I wonder if these echoes are meant to last? Four walls are all invisible; my mind still can see. Don’t say it’s all up to me; I seek a key, To unlock the stories held in shadows cast— Old creaking in the floors is calling out to me, Four walls are all invisible; my mind still can see.

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Date: 11/15/2024 7:25:00 PM
How kind of you, dear A.S. I know you have made a difference... <3 I was homeless for a short time....I know how bad it can be. Thanks, dear friend.
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/16/2024 6:08:00 AM
Thank you Paige! I don't know everything about it, but I know a little something about perseverance. You, my dear friend show it in so many ways. The difference that you make for me is your unwavering support. I'm happier because of it! <3 A.S.
Date: 11/14/2024 11:58:00 AM
Hello A.S. the homeless people are growing in numbers in Canada. Rents are vey high. Old buildings are being redone. the people living in older buildings are told to leave. When they return they discover they have to pay a higher rent. now more homeless people have no homes, it is not fair. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/16/2024 10:59:00 AM
Hello A.S. When I go through my closet , taking out the clothes that do not fit, or want. I give my unwanted clothes to Good Will. I also gave away my warm blanket For someone to be warm. Enjoy your day A.S. /Darlene/
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/14/2024 5:10:00 PM
It is truly sad how people are disenfranchised by other people. It hurts my heart to no end. I make a point of trying to give ten times more to the world than I take from it every day. I choose to write about sadness because it needs to be acknowledged in order to be eradicated. I wish you a wonderful everyday dear poet! A.S.
Date: 11/14/2024 11:01:00 AM
Brilliant write AS……so sad…..”four walls are all invisible….my mind still can see” l just love that! Debx
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/14/2024 11:14:00 AM
I always find myself when I spend time talking to the people on the street, they are such wonderful examples of humanity to share a coffee with. Most just want to be seen with out being judged... Warmly A.S.

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