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The Hitchhiker

Heavy buckets of rain.. Falling from the sky An explosion of heavy downpours.. A cold chilling night .. feeling the bone chilling cold.. The sound of pouring rain is a safe haven.. When indoors.. Warm and cozy at home.. Homebound for the night.. Feeling a sense of security.. Dreading the moment of departure.. Departing from my safe haven.. Driving in my car.. On a deep dark road... The sound of only heavy rain.. The sky is crying a thousand tears.. Windsheild wipers are moving at the greatest speed.. Hautingly eerie.. Briefly I see someone standing at the intersection.. A women desperately needing transportation.. Standing with an umbrella in one hand.. Thumb standing in another.. Feeling such compassion for a women desperately seeking a ride.. With no hesitation I stop and pull over.. A women stranded on a deep dark rainy night.. I have done a good deed for the night A good Samaritan I am.. The Hitchhiker entered inside my car without hesitation.. Stating where her destination would be.. I.. Without hesitation proceeded to drive her to the destination.. Visibility is quite poor.. I continue to drive.. The hitchhiker pointed at her destination.. I quickly pulled over.. With a warm smile.. She thanked me kindly Was indeed so grateful for the ride.. I questioned her destination As there was only a massive sign The massive sign .. Of which.. Stated it was a Cemetery.. She graciously beamed.. And stated.. " I have come here only to escort the others to their permanent home ".. I must go now.. Rest assured you shall be rewarded for your kindness.. Goodbye for now.. Astonished and amazed.. Goosepimples had appeared instantaneously.. And ever so rapidly on my arms.. Strands of fibers Standing straight.. I watched the woman hitchiker walk away happily.. A warm and lovely glow A smile on her face.. She gracefully walked towards the cemetary.. And with a blink of an eye she completely vanished.. Vanished without a trace.. The gracious hitchhiker.. Was she a spirit guide in disguise ? An angel in disguise? A deep dark mystery shall always remain.. On a cold and rainy winters night.. Driving alone along a deep dark highway..

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Date: 6/13/2018 5:16:00 PM
Wow. LOVE this story Robertina. I think she was both...
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Robertina B.
Date: 6/14/2018 7:22:00 PM
" So happy you enjoyed it, Leanne.. Thank you!! Blessings.."
Date: 6/12/2018 10:51:00 AM
Haunting, mysterious, wonderful, imaginative, angelic,...the proverbial 'enigma wrapped in a riddle,'...all these terms--and many more--simply introduce this remarkable poem. Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 6/12/2018 6:20:00 AM
Kudos for your imagination, Robertina. Yes..life sometimes offers moments when we reveal to ourselves what we are made of..you captured such a moment.
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Robertina B.
Date: 6/12/2018 6:08:00 PM
Thank you for visiting, Vijay.. You are so kind!!
Date: 6/10/2018 11:55:00 PM
Very mysterious and intriquing, I have enjoyed your poem Robertina.
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Robertina B.
Date: 6/11/2018 7:41:00 PM
Happy you enjoyed my poem, Pixie.. Thank you for your lovely feedback..
Date: 6/10/2018 9:41:00 PM
You'll have to go by yourself...I'm not going on that trip...Imagination gone wild...Nice write Robertina...All the best
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Robertina B.
Date: 6/11/2018 7:44:00 PM
"Thank you for your great feedback and visit, Arturo.. I guess I couldn't twist your arm to go along with me on that trip.. Ha Ha.. All the best to you as well!!

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