The hill of hope

Hope is a feeling that people spend years believing in, not because it leads them to a place full of flowers,

but because it's the only thing anyone doesn't doubt. Then there is no difference between the lust of achieving and the act of believing in it.

And when that kind of soul grips the handle of the sword—the sword that once provided power to the soul who had lost everything to stand in the world—

that sword develops a second edge because of the one holding it, and it causes damage to both the good and the bad.

Hope is like a hill. If you think—you can walk on it as long as you have strength, believing that at the end you will achieve the salvation you always wanted.

You start to believe in the shadow of hope because it seems beautiful and sweet. To ask someone for your deeds, and to think they will fulfill your wish—that is belief, not hope,

because that is what people are running behind: doing good deeds by suffering so they don’t have to suffer after death.

But at the top of the hill there is no peak, because you never wanted to find it. That hill has lost its top now—it only has an edge where a man can see a flowing river of water.

And while looking at it, a man loses something: it could be belief or salvation, but not hope—

because it was lost when you laid your foot on the hill. That is when hope becomes belief, and that day, a side of humanity was born—one no soul had ever witnessed, yet one everyone became a part of.
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Date: 9/3/2025 8:30:00 AM
Hello TBP, Congrats on POTD! The image of the sword developing a second edge because of who holds it is stunning. You've written something that challenges how we think about these fundamental human drives. Blessings, TBP, Daniel
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Date: 9/2/2025 5:41:00 AM
Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 8/31/2025 5:24:00 PM
(Hope) - ' is an anchor for the soul, a confident expectation in God's faithfulness and the fulfillment of His promises. ' Congratulations TBP, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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The bloody Pen
Date: 9/1/2025 6:37:00 AM
I don't wanna interfere your perspective, ma'am. And thanks for your appreciation, brandy. Have a great day.
Date: 8/31/2025 4:50:00 PM
Well trying to figure this one out and getting a bit lost so I'll just say that hope, belief, faith... all related. Hope realized leads to a joyous experience
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The bloody Pen
Date: 9/1/2025 5:59:00 AM
"That's how it should be clear as a mud not simple, tom." There is difference between both of us , you may have simple answer for complex question and, I may have complex answer for simple question. No one is wrong or right, and I didn't wanted to explain the whole poem I just wanted to clear the main premise, and I did.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/31/2025 6:28:00 PM
Well that's clear as mud. My strength comes from my reliance on a God who's Holy Spirit empowers the faithful. Alone I am weak
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The bloody Pen
Date: 8/31/2025 6:00:00 PM
“Thank you for the appreciation, Tom Woody. I would not completely simplify the topic for you, but I would not let it be confusing either. The basic premise of the story is that people start to depend on God more than the willpower and strength they have. They start to depend on it and call it a journey, just by praying. At the end, with no hope and just the belief that they would get it from their God, there is no peace. It’s just an edge. And because of that circumstance, only the one who starts to do that sees the circumstance; the other one doesn’t see it. So a very new generation starts to follow this ritual, choosing hope, or choosing belief over hope. That’s why, day after day, generation by generation, a dark side of humanity was born, where everyone becomes a part of it.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/31/2025 5:30:00 PM
Me too. And that's why I wanted to focus on the subject. The understanding of hope.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/31/2025 4:56:00 PM
Enjoy your special day
Date: 8/31/2025 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Hope is a precious gift. I am addicted to hope and what can be. Blessings of hope to you!
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The bloody Pen
Date: 9/1/2025 6:34:00 AM
Thanks, sam. And I agree with you get addicted to hope and what can be. Have a great day.
Date: 8/31/2025 12:12:00 PM
Excellent Prose piece, thought-provoking and smooth flowing as I read it. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
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The bloody Pen
Date: 9/1/2025 6:35:00 AM
I'm glad you found my work thought Provoking. Thanks for your appreciation
Date: 8/31/2025 11:24:00 AM
Yeah, hoping for hope, hoping you'll cope, hoping you don't slip on the soap! Nope, I'm no dope, but I hope! Bloody good pen my friend!
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/1/2025 3:18:00 PM
Crack is whack, Jack!
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The bloody Pen
Date: 9/1/2025 6:36:00 AM
"Hope is dope man". And thanks for your appreciation through your rhyming, I enjoyed reading it.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/31/2025 4:48:00 PM
Don't forget the "rope a dope!"
Date: 8/31/2025 10:38:00 AM
Hello the bloody Pen, My fav. Are verses verse 5,verse 6 verse 7 verse verse 8 verse 9 These are my favourites . Enjoy your weekend my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2025 10:18:00 AM
Hello The bloody Pen, I will. I hope all is well with you. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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The bloody Pen
Date: 9/1/2025 6:38:00 AM
Enjoy your too.
Date: 8/31/2025 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The hill of hope" write. Great Ending... Have a blessed day with your win...........
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The bloody Pen
Date: 8/31/2025 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, Paula. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my work. And i appreciate your words on my ending.
Date: 8/31/2025 2:56:00 AM
thought provoking poem, indeed. The delineation of hope and belief or the entwinement? Hmmm...Enjoyed beginning my day with this poem. Congrats on POTD designation
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The bloody Pen
Date: 8/31/2025 10:08:00 AM
That's the thing I like to play with hope and belief. I am glad you found my work thought Provoking. Enjoy your day too
Date: 8/31/2025 1:13:00 AM
Better to have hope than to mope. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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The bloody Pen
Date: 8/31/2025 10:09:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation. Have a nice one too.
Date: 8/30/2025 3:24:00 PM
Hello The bloody Pen, wow! i enjoyed reading this poem. Also it will be my fav. Enjoy your weekend my friend. /Darlene/
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The bloody Pen
Date: 9/3/2025 6:01:00 PM
I read that Darlene. Have a great day.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/2/2025 3:03:00 PM
Hello bloody Pen, My comments are under the Tom woody's comments. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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The bloody Pen
Date: 8/30/2025 10:09:00 PM
Thank you ,Darlene. So whats your favourite line in my poem?. And enjoy your day
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