The hill of hope

Hope is a feeling that people spend years believing in, not because it leads them to a place full of flowers,

but because it's the only thing anyone doesn't doubt. Then there is no difference between the lust of achieving and the act of believing in it.

And when that kind of soul grips the handle of the sword—the sword that once provided power to the soul who had lost everything to stand in the world—

that sword develops a second edge because of the one holding it, and it causes damage to both the good and the bad.

Hope is like a hill. If you think—you can walk on it as long as you have strength, believing that at the end you will achieve the salvation you always wanted.

You start to believe in the shadow of hope because it seems beautiful and sweet. To ask someone for your deeds, and to think they will fulfill your wish—that is belief, not hope,

because that is what people are running behind: doing good deeds by suffering so they don’t have to suffer after death.

But at the top of the hill there is no peak, because you never wanted to find it. That hill has lost its top now—it only has an edge where a man can see a flowing river of water.

And while looking at it, a man loses something: it could be belief or salvation, but not hope—

because it was lost when you laid your foot on the hill. That is when hope becomes belief, and that day, a side of humanity was born—one no soul had ever witnessed, yet one everyone became a part of.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodgers Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 8:30 AM
Hello TBP, Congrats on POTD! The image of the sword developing a second edge because of who holds it is stunning. You've written something that challenges how we think about these fundamental human drives. Blessings, TBP, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 5:41 AM
Congrats on POTD!
Nicole Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 5:24 PM
(Hope) - ' is an anchor for the soul, a confident expectation in God's faithfulness and the fulfillment of His promises. ' Congratulations TBP, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Pen Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 6:37 AM
I don't wanna interfere your perspective, ma'am. And thanks for your appreciation, brandy. Have a great day.
Kauffman Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Hope is a precious gift. I am addicted to hope and what can be. Blessings of hope to you!
Pen Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 6:34 AM
Thanks, sam. And I agree with you get addicted to hope and what can be. Have a great day.
Baker Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Excellent Prose piece, thought-provoking and smooth flowing as I read it. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
Pen Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 6:35 AM
I'm glad you found my work thought Provoking. Thanks for your appreciation
Freie Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 11:24 AM
Yeah, hoping for hope, hoping you'll cope, hoping you don't slip on the soap! Nope, I'm no dope, but I hope! Bloody good pen my friend!
Pen Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 6:36 AM
"Hope is dope man". And thanks for your appreciation through your rhyming, I enjoyed reading it.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 10:38 AM
Hello the bloody Pen, My fav. Are verses verse 5,verse 6 verse 7 verse verse 8 verse 9 These are my favourites . Enjoy your weekend my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 10:18 AM
Hello The bloody Pen, I will. I hope all is well with you. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Pen Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 6:38 AM
Enjoy your too.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The hill of hope" write. Great Ending... Have a blessed day with your win...........
Pen Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 10:06 AM
Thank you, Paula. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my work. And i appreciate your words on my ending.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 2:56 AM
thought provoking poem, indeed. The delineation of hope and belief or the entwinement? Hmmm...Enjoyed beginning my day with this poem. Congrats on POTD designation
Pen Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 10:08 AM
That's the thing I like to play with hope and belief. I am glad you found my work thought Provoking. Enjoy your day too
Edmonds  Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 1:13 AM
Better to have hope than to mope. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Pen Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 10:09 AM
Thanks for your appreciation. Have a nice one too.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 3:24 PM
Hello The bloody Pen, wow! i enjoyed reading this poem. Also it will be my fav. Enjoy your weekend my friend. /Darlene/
Pen Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 6:01 PM
I read that Darlene. Have a great day.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 3:03 PM
Hello bloody Pen, My comments are under the Tom woody's comments. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Pen Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 10:09 PM
Thank you ,Darlene. So whats your favourite line in my poem?. And enjoy your day
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