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The Hiding Sun

As the sun hides behind thick clouds The roosters try to crow it out But that sun is not very proud As the sun hides behind thick clouds The Doves coo a love song aloud Try to coax it without a doubt As the sun hides behind gray clouds The roosters try to crow it out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/15/2013 8:44:00 PM
Hello Sara, ha ha I love this.. I hope the rooster had success. wish the sun would hide. it's been beyond sunny here in Texas... xox...Linda
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Date: 8/15/2013 4:57:00 PM
Another delightful ditty, Sara... Terry
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Date: 8/15/2013 4:41:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 8/15/2013 12:17:00 AM
This style words for me.
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Date: 8/14/2013 10:47:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this enlightening write this evening! This is a wonderful poem! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/14/2013 9:12:00 PM
Beautiful. Love the imagery you have sketched to show the game of birds, clouds and the Sun in this little sweet Poem and thank you Sara for your sweet comments on my Love feelings Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra
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Date: 8/14/2013 7:36:00 PM
I love how you can make everyday things so beautiful Sara....
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Date: 8/14/2013 2:34:00 PM
Very nice poem, Sara! I think there is a metaphor hidden in these lines...."Sometimes people try to bring out the best in us, even when we don't want them to"....that is what this poem says to me. Also, thank you for reading my autumn poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Date: 8/14/2013 7:04:00 AM
Great write, true to form, enjoyed the read, love the imagery, just a question, is Gray in line 7 typo , these for me are very hard, well done, blessings sueellen
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Date: 8/14/2013 6:15:00 AM
Very lovely and flowing piece. Loved it. Betty
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Date: 8/14/2013 5:52:00 AM
- I'll blow the clouds away ... so the sun will shine on you. - Beautiful, Sara! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/14/2013 5:43:00 AM
a lovely use of words Sara this sings to me Shadow x smiles
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