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The Hidden Simplicity of the Macabre

Hidden deeply in the disparadised mind; Lays a spot where hope fails to rise. Disapprobation of crosses, crescents, and stars, Eidolicly veiled over our internal scars. Reason allows and insidiously leads, through the ghastly realm of immortality. Saints may follow, yet will never lead; Zealously trying to help you regain your blind normalcy. This and that may temporarily ease the sore. The material bliss is quickly lost, once again aware of Your place as times required whore. Oh! With the outmost certainty, even the worms Will succumb to the rot of eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/19/2011 11:01:00 AM
Quite an entry for a Christmas Dejavu Contest? I just stopped by to tell you it is a good write! Yet, you must always enter a form [hopefully the correct one] when entering a contest. I would list this as Verse the is some rhyme in it so not free verse. Line 11 I think you want and ['s] on [time's] Light & Love
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Jeron Adams
Date: 12/19/2011 1:45:00 PM
Thankyou for the advice, I really Do not know the proper rules of poetry. However I did mean to enter it into the Christmas Dejavu contest: What I was trying to say is that the holiday season is supposed to be a joyous time of the year, but when one is frustrated with the very meaning behind the holiday's themselves they will be unable to find joy in the said holidays. Somewhat of a nihilist approach I guess. In the end, everything is just dust in the wind.

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