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The Hidden Nature Trail

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For Miranda Hawley's Choose A Title, Choose 2 Phrases Poetry Contest

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To get away from the noise daily heard around me, I decided I would take a hike up the one mountain which has stirred me with its beauty, for I’ve had an ache to leave the world’s commotion for a while. I took the normal path but felt compelled to wander off it. Then after a mile, I found a hidden spot which magic held. I ducked beneath low hanging limbs of trees. A songbird’s chirp had lured me to that place. I followed that old trail as summer’s breeze caressed me. Soon I felt as if God’s grace embraced me too. Nearby a brook I lay in utter bliss and wishing I could stay!

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Date: 12/2/2023 5:01:00 PM
Good job and congratulations!
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Date: 11/21/2023 7:05:00 AM
Hello Andrea. Good Morning. Format aside because it will always be the words that matter to me. You take us reader along with you on this trail that holds the key to peace happiness and beauty. It is lovely. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent and imagery as well. Have a wonderful day. Happy Thanksgiving. Peace and Blessings always. a (smile)
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Date: 11/12/2023 11:12:00 PM
such beautiful poetry, i would. have kike "trekking" ? with you in this place, thanks andrea for the delicious and lovely poem
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Date: 11/12/2023 12:42:00 PM
Very lovely... I loved your bold words- they went together! I love too the last lines...'wish I could stay' :)
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Date: 11/12/2023 3:51:00 AM
Brilliant sonnet as always the way you’ve written this is truly so captivating and has a flow to it that gets readers hooked from the very first line. I really love the last line the most. So good. We all have that one place in nature we turn to, to get away from the noise . Pleasure reading this
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Date: 11/11/2023 3:42:00 PM
How lovely, I feel soothed by reading your poem Andrea.
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