The Hi That He Remembers

The "Hi" That He Remembers


With spontaneous playfulness,
her smooth leggings glided 
through a swirling pile of leaves 
across the high school sidewalk, 
kicking them skyward

with wide, graceful strides. 
Other movements would have 
distracted me, as leaves 

forcefully tore off 
the surrounding trees, 
but my eyes were bolted upon 

her
     floating
flirtatious
figure 
with 
     perfect 
          little 
               lifts. 

Her wide lip smile approached mine
with a thrust of energy 
like the Indian Summer wind 

that surrounded our passing 
like a unified hug. 

"Hi," she breathed in a soft smoky voice,
as that usually effortless word 
was left in my throat...

until I turned around 
to take more of her in, 
to try to stop 

that moment from leaving
like that spinning leaf pile 
behind her. 

She confidently continued 
on her way 
without 
a reciprocated head spin. 

That evening's Harvest Moon 
seemed to pulse, pulse, pulse,
mirroring my elated thoughts, 

rehearsing the scene 
where a pretty girl 
looked 

     me
          in 
              the 
         eyes 
     and 
          spoke 
               a 
                  word!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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October 21, 2019 at 7:23 PM
I love this, i have not looked at the other yet but this one was very well crafted :)
Ligon Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Thanks, Sandra.
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October 20, 2019 at 3:18 PM
I think I prefer this poEm... Written so well..
Ligon Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 10:24 PM
Thanks. I prefer it over the other as well. He was more impacted by it than she was.
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