The Hermit

Grey shadows cast by fear and doubt,
Are weighty, dank, and threatening.
They hover just like thunder clouds.

So covered by the deathly shroud
Of freshly putrid memory
That filters this whole scenery.

At any moment, death could strike
The looming truth I know too well
Which gives my chest a constant fright
I must retreat into my shell.

The only way for me to quell
The pain that aches so stark 
Is hiding from both light and dark.

Alas, the greatest tragedy:
The hermit bathed in tempting sun,
Abandons secure strategy
To give the bliss just one more run.

The selfish joy grows steadier,
Just as my womb grows heavier.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 12:13 PM
incredibly deep write many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Nicole. It's so deep I am afraid to speak for fear if I am wrong and fear if I am right.
Mehta Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 5:49 AM
You have said it all in the last two lines, Nicole. congrats on the win
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