The Helmsman

“Over there,” yelled the Helmsman
“On the Starboard side.”
Though when I looked from left to right
Nothing caught my eye

“Over there,” he yelled again
“On the starboard side.”
And again as I looked from left to right
Nothing caught my eye

But I knew when I saw her
For she was not water nor was she beast
That she had come upon us
To rest us all in peace

Her fingers rattled the rigging
As all hands fought to stow the cloth
The helmsman lashed himself to the wheel
We faced the worst of her wrath

Then she brought the main-mast down
The crow’s nest crashed upon the deck
Fear eclipsed all conscious thought
For we floated upon a wreck

Our lives so fully in the hands
Of nature’s primeval fury
We prayed to our mystical gods
For their heavenly mercy

Lo she ignored our desperate pleas
As she drove us beneath the waves
Relaxed and confident she left us 
To our watery graves

Then the helmsman free from his shackles
Pulled us with all his might
Dragged us by our sodden collars
Toward the watery moonlight

The helmsman of defiant strength
Pulled us with all his might
Through our aquatic graves
To freedom’s shining moonlight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/19/2021 12:50:00 PM
Just a revisit Scott, and feeling an amount of Hope the chance of repreive.'
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Date: 1/3/2018 4:15:00 PM
So vivid and tranfixing, i had a love of the sea before I sailed upon her. Then once offshore, some of the romance departed, as I had to make the damn thing go round the clock. Much of it was dull, but those times like you describe, well, you grow up in a hurry.
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Date: 10/27/2017 7:49:00 AM
Enjoyed this one, Scott. O mighty helmsman indeed! I, for one, most fervently hope your ink is now spilling freely once more! All my very best, Scott! :) john
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Date: 8/16/2017 10:05:00 AM
This is exceptional poetry my friend.. Riveting from start to finish and superbly created and presented. Without any doubt, a very solid ten and a fav for me.. Loved every word of it...
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:47:00 PM
Thrilling tale! A gift of a write.
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:40:00 PM
really love this one, mate
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Date: 3/2/2017 5:07:00 PM
This is really a great poem! love the story within and the struggle. great write/great read!
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Date: 3/1/2017 12:13:00 PM
The imagery of this piece is well suited to the emotions solicited from the author, one of dread with sinister reverberations. Emile.
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Date: 2/23/2017 8:23:00 AM
I fear the seas, but I love how you have woven your words and came up with a descriptive and visually strong piece! Great, Scott!
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Date: 2/20/2017 8:00:00 AM
I thought I would read this one again. A most impressive write.
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:44:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, Scott. Hope to see something new from you SOON!
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Date: 2/16/2017 8:56:00 AM
Exceptional writing, I really felt this one Scott. Bravo and a 7.
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Date: 2/10/2017 9:37:00 PM
:) I like this a lot!! Scott... reminds me how important "mares tails and mackerel scales" are!! ;) wonderful poem!! Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 2/8/2017 2:49:00 AM
- Scott, a truly wonderful poem - Well done !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/7/2017 11:42:00 PM
Your imagery with personalization is outstanding in this dramatic piece Scott. Very well written with a fantastic ending! I am afraid of the sea and, other than taking Ferry rides from shore to shore, I don't like being on the open sea far away from land. Flying is a different story. LOL ; ) 7
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Date: 2/4/2017 2:50:00 PM
Yes where would we be without Him? another good one mate.'
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Date: 2/1/2017 3:36:00 PM
wow, this is wonderful extended metaphor, Scott. VERY nicely done!! A great poem.
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