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"Her face was veiled, yet to my fancied sight
Love, sweetness, goodness in her person shined
So clear as in no face with more delight.
But O! as to embrace me she inclined
I waked, she fled, and day brought back my night"

- John Milton

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The Heartwood Canticle

Thy curve hath taught
the rosewood how to sing
and my fingers
long roughened by cedar
grow gentle upon thy hips
returning unto the edge of thy ebony

Through forty harvests
rain hath polished
snow hath kept
the sun made sweet the grain

Lo, the wood thrush calleth
from the bough
where once this timber
drank the morning

Thrice I say unto thee
I love thee—

And another ring
God closeth
in the heartwood

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 10:28 PM
So sweet is the romance staged in the Heartwood through the symbolism of the carpenter whose touch gives glowing dimensions to the rosewood.The image and the poem are equally soothing. Love your quotes in most of your poems. This time you have selected an appropriate quote from Milton. Keep going and growing as a wonderful poet, dear Daniel....
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August 2, 2026 at 8:47 PM
Lovely poetry Daniel. If poetry and music speak the language of love, poets keep writing and musicians play on… Beryl
Rodgers Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:08 AM
Dear Beryl, thank you so much. I love the way you phrased that, poetry and music really do share the same bloodstream. When they meet, something in us wakes up. I’m grateful this one sang for you. Blessings, Daniel
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August 2, 2026 at 11:31 AM
Hey Daniel, this is a beautifully crafted poem that blends love, nature, and the passage of time. The connection between the carpenter’s hands and the living wood feels deeply symbolic, showing how patience, care, and devotion can transform something ordinary into something precious. The final image of another ring closing in the heartwood is a touching reminder of love enduring through the seasons of life... You have a wonderful way with words..
Rodgers Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:09 AM
Dear Silent One, your reflections always mean a great deal to me. I’m glad the symbolism in the hands and the wood spoke to you, that was the heart of the piece, the way devotion shapes what it touches. Thank you for reading with such depth. Blessings, Daniel
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August 2, 2026 at 11:25 AM
Hey Daniel, this is a beautifully crafted poem that blends love, nature, and the passage of time. The connection between the carpenter’s hands and the living wood feels deeply symbolic, showing how patience, care, and devotion can transform something ordinary into something precious. The final image of another ring closing in the heartwood is a touching reminder of love enduring through the seasons of life... You have a wonderful way with words..
Winter Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 4:10 AM
Dearest Daniel, this is so beautiful! The imagery and the lyrics are penned beautifully. With love and respect always, Anne
Rodgers Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:09 AM
Dearest Anne, thank you. Your words always carry such warmth. I’m glad the imagery and the lyric flow reached you. With love and respect always. Blessings, Daniel
Daniel Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 2:41 AM
Beautiful love poem, Daniel😊
Rodgers Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:10 AM
Dear Joanna, thank you so much. I’m glad the love‑lyric quality came through for you. I appreciate your kind note. Blessings, Daniel
Smith  Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 12:25 AM
I found your words very moving. 🕊️⭐
Rodgers Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:11 AM
Dear Alison, thank you. I’m touched that the poem moved you, that means more than you know. Blessings, Daniel
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July 30, 2026 at 8:41 PM
A verse of togetherness, two hearts beating as one. Soulmates for eternity.❤️ Tom
Rodgers Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:11 AM
Hello Tom, I appreciate you. Yes, two hearts in one rhythm, shaped by time and tenderness. Thank you for reading with such generosity. Blessings, Daniel
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July 30, 2026 at 4:26 PM
WOW. BEAUTIFUL- A FAV :)
Rodgers Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:12 AM
Dear Paige, thank you for the FAV, so kind of you. I’m really glad the poem spoke to you. Blessings, Daniel
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