The Heart, the Soul

Carried forth between two trees
It seems the wind has got the best of me
Pushing me off of my two feet
I crumble down into the soil

The sun licks at me
And I gaze tiredly towards the sky
Alone between two trees
The gap where the sun lies

The sun lies
Your soul dies

Lost it seems, but the direction is clear
I suppose the only thing holding me back is fear
I try to pull myself back up
But the soil sticks to me like glue

It beats upon me, abusing my mind
My black clothes swelter, I wasn't ready for this
The two trees grin upon my woe
The dread stays and your soul goes

The sun grins
Your heart thins

I wish I can reach between those trees
To stand upon the air - to see what God sees
As my woe deepens in the soil
Would I not look down upon myself...

Only to see me spoil

I suppose you can stay where you are
After all you are too far
To find me and heal
I've fallen between two trees and the sun cannot feel

But tear the heart
And scorch the soul

I was carried here
Could I be carried once more?
Would anyone out there find me?
I suppose the one that's far

Can heal the scorching scar
If one could mend a scorching...torn-up soul

If one could bear this heart to hold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 20, 2023 at 4:42 PM
Love the depth of your poems, how you get one to open ones mind
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November 17, 2011 at 10:55 PM
Dear Laura, I'm running out of words to describe YOUR POETIC Art I noticed You receive a LOT of comments From James Paranteau A very fine POET and Carol Brown is my Mentor I wish YOU much success in YOUR POETRY Endeavors LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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June 15, 2011 at 11:33 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Laura. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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June 15, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Your heart and soul...so wrapped up in this write dear poet ! I read it several times to get its full purpose of being spilled on your slip ! I enjoyed very much ! Have a wonderful week Laura ! Much love, james
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