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The Heart That Bleeds

each day a subtle nightmare doubtful “sorry” mornings, lavender lesions and smiles disguised brazen warnings-- so many a blind eye turned to the nights of violent eyes, broken promises assuring angry fists and silent cries-- her walls all turned to vices crushing her broken wings, left her thinking this was it it's time to pack my things-- she put everything she had into a note she mailed to me, not much but a broken heart which leads us here to see-- rose petals bleeding reddish for two knife-opened wrists, cries echo inside the church the torture of grief persists-- February 19, 2016

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Date: 9/3/2016 4:55:00 AM
A wonderfully moving piece Sam! Congratulations on your high placement. Excellent! : ) 7
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Sam Jameson
Date: 9/6/2016 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Connie-- I appreciate the kindhearted feedback. Have a great day :)
Date: 8/29/2016 10:18:00 AM
Sam, wonderful flow and sadly beautiful...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Sam Jameson
Date: 8/29/2016 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Laura-- it was nice to dust off some older work for this one. Thanks for my placement-- have a great day :)
Date: 2/26/2016 5:13:00 AM
Greetings Sam. Congrats for your placement with this fine verse....
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/26/2016 7:28:00 AM
Much appreciated, Teddy. Thank you for the kind remark on the word..have a great day!
Date: 2/24/2016 10:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! A sad, but well-written poem. Well done.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/24/2016 10:11:00 PM
As I tell my wife, it's not all puppy dogs and ice cream out there.. sometimes my writing casts its own shadow, just where the words go it seems..but thank you, Susan, for your congratulatory words, I really appreciate the comments. have a great night!
Date: 2/24/2016 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations - and well-deserved - I love your poem ... CayCay
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/24/2016 10:08:00 PM
Well thank you, CayCay. I really appreciate you dropping by with your kind remarks...thanks for supporting the work. I hope to hear more from you in the future, take care!
Date: 2/24/2016 8:44:00 AM
wow, I love this!! Congrats for your win . Yours very clearly shows the depths of sorrow over love.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/24/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. However I do believe that sorrow would be quite shallow if not for the depth of love. Thank you for your kind congratulations on the work, have a great day :)
Date: 2/22/2016 1:02:00 PM
Sam, enjoyed your poem and win. LINDA
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/22/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Linda.
Date: 2/22/2016 11:52:00 AM
Sam, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/22/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, much appreciated!
Date: 2/22/2016 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win! You really are deserving Sam! :)
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/22/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Hans. I appreciate the warm regards!
Date: 2/22/2016 4:03:00 AM
So so emotive Sam.. glad to see on winners list.. big congrats!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/22/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you, Dr...I am also glad it was able to make the list ;) I appreciate your comments, truly. Ciao my friend!
Date: 2/19/2016 7:36:00 AM
WOW... I could almost feel your pain. Well put out expression...
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/19/2016 11:19:00 AM
I'm glad the emotion was able to pass through the words and connect. Thank you Benny for your comment, have a great day..

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