Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- The Heart Surrenders To the Truth -

A dream 
caught up in the night's 
magic and splendor
sitting at the driving seat 
turning feelings 

I realize every moment 
must be achieved
emotions labors 
in the heart's toil 

So many truths dreams and desire envelopes
standing in front of these eyes lids open wide 
Remember the words we said 
swore to protect and honor the joy
in all we experienced together

Drumming beats echo warm softly
Love found our soul naked and clean
purified soft snow melting desire queen 
The red rose whispers 
of passion and amor
petals tremble upon a breathless air 

With fragrant meanings tides turn
where the sweetest perfume blows divine 
flashing one spirit sparkling dewdrops horizon 
What can be as bright as the sun

Colors a bridge to only god knows 
The dream of a life beyond all none can compare 
were we could fly everywhere with angel wings
inside each others heartbeat complete 





Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
A Collaborated Poem 21.10.2015

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Lystra Siew November 12, 2015 at 11:46 AM Firstly thank you Anne for the kind words. I love the way your words dances with emotions. Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2015 at 12:20 PM - Lystra, thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein October 26, 2015 at 5:36 PM Wow! This is a very beautiful poem.....great collaboration Anne and Liam u both nailed it.... I really enjoyed reading it.... :)

Thomas Martin October 26, 2015 at 12:54 PM Great write!! Last stanza so memorable: Love the last two lines particularly about angels flying in heartbeats. Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 1:22 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Thomas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elis Artis October 25, 2015 at 10:02 AM Another productive collab! This is a masterpiece Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 1:21 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Elis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Njeri Hunjeri October 24, 2015 at 3:50 PM "Drumming beats echo warm softly Love found our soul naked and clean" wow. Your collabos always produces so much beauty. 7+ Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 1:20 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Njeri :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez October 24, 2015 at 1:42 AM Lovely poem...lovely thoughts. Anne and LIam, congrats on another successful collab! The last line is tops "inside each others heartbeat complete"! 7. hugs to both of you... Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 1:20 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus October 23, 2015 at 3:24 PM With words like these, how could a heart not surrender!! Another lovely collaboration. Full marks to both of you! ~ Warm regards // paul Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 1:20 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley October 23, 2015 at 2:23 PM Congrats to both of you Anne-Lise and Liam. Solid performance, the passions excels! A7 Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 1:19 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neva Romaine October 23, 2015 at 12:53 PM Hey Anne Lise, stopped by for a visit. An absolutely beautiful poem collaboration from you and Liam. Filled with deep and passionate love and longing. Excellent writing and expression from you both! Be Blessed, Neva Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 1:19 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Neva :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2015 at 3:21 PM You guys make a magical duo!! Beautiful sentiments in this poem. Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 1:18 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Patricia Opel Jaye October 22, 2015 at 2:46 PM Anne beautiful I'm in awe of your poetry. I enjoyed reading your poetry I look forward to reading more of your work. Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 1:18 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Patricia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 22, 2015 at 5:16 AM Splendid collaboration Anne Lise and Liam.. =`) your brush match well... =`)~Olive Eloisa Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2015 at 6:42 AM - Olive, thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis October 22, 2015 at 2:33 AM Your verses will make, even the Muse herself, envious! Congratulations to both of you, Anne-Lise and Liam! This is beyond marvelous! A seven to each! Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2015 at 2:48 AM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith October 21, 2015 at 3:15 PM A wonderful collaboration A-L and Liam Anne-Lise Andresen October 21, 2015 at 11:34 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter October 21, 2015 at 3:02 PM Hi Ann Lise n' Liam! Another very beautiful, romantic passionate, and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!A most beautiful dreamy sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just wonderful!So very beautiful and sweet.Very enchanting!I just love it!Superb imagery!Just excellent.Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen October 21, 2015 at 11:33 PM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick October 21, 2015 at 2:08 PM Some very good metaphorical language..I enjoyed reading this one today...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen October 21, 2015 at 11:32 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid October 21, 2015 at 2:00 PM your pen anne lise sparkled beautiful in this thank you deeply for the pleasure as always it shines wishing you a blessed evening pal Anne-Lise Andresen October 21, 2015 at 2:06 PM - Same words goes to you, Liam - I wish you a lovely evening and a great day tomorrow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)