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The Heart Stops

and I'm flying over fields of golden wheat as if I've always known how to use wings freed by eternity's wind, onward and onward toward a light that is. But, the wall looms tall and prevents me, for even such wings as these cannot attain that height, and I fall back into the beating heart of a mortal man. This poem was inspired by a near death experience my father had after a logging accident in the early 1970s

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Date: 10/3/2021 7:34:00 PM
Fine work, Chetta. I was once told by a master's level nurse that no disease actually kills a person; that a person dies when his/her heart stops beating, period! There is a great deal of truth in that, I think.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 10/4/2021 2:26:00 PM
Thank you. I worked for years in nursing homes. Some of the close to death experiences of the residents were astounding. One sweet elderly lady saw an angel in the corner, another asked me who was that man that smelled like sulphur? The veil between life and death becomes thin as death approaches!

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