The Heart Of Death

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Buffed out as though with emery; Alzheimer's stole your memory. And you sit in your chair and gaze; lost in a perpetual haze. You aren't in pain, but don't look well: for you're, little more than a shell. And when I touch you, you pull back; as if fending off an attack. How horrible to be confined; essentially trapped in one's mind. And although I wish it weren't so: love only adds to my sorrow. Dementia's something we'll work through, for I'll never abandon you. And when you breathe your final breath: my tears will pierce the heart of Death.

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Date: 3/15/2020 8:00:00 AM
Superb, powerful write that hits close to home for me, Emilie. I lost my old man to dementia 3 years ago. Congratulations on your win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2020 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/13/2020 4:41:00 PM
I have witnessed this sad disfunction of many friends and family. You have extended my thoughts into beautiful words.
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Date: 3/13/2020 4:59:00 PM
Thanks Ralph, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/12/2020 5:23:00 PM
Your poem moved me to tears Emile. My best friend and my dear aunt faded away into their own world as their memories were stollen by this horrible disease. Your entire poem is one of beauty and understanding. I am faving this wonderful poem Emile! xxoo
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Date: 3/13/2020 9:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie, Alzheimer's has stolen many memories, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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