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The Heart Carved On The Tree

There was a lady that I once knew She met her love she felt was true He carved their initials into a tree As she leaned closely on his knee Trouble in paradise soon they learned When her initials he wanted to burn Her middle name he did not know Until on the tree he wanted to show Her initials spelled a body part you see For her name was Linda Elaine Greene When he burned it into the tree He was concerned exactly what would be When also carved his name into the tree His name spelled a body also you see For his name was Armond Raymond Moran Now what was seen Leg Loves Arm so he ran

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Date: 9/16/2009 2:01:00 AM
Very nice, poem well put together, and thanks for your comments Abe
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:12:00 AM
Made me chuckle this one Sara>>James
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Date: 9/9/2009 9:50:00 PM
Sara... Great Poem... Witty and a good story... I had to read the last two lines twice and then I cracked-Up (Ha! Ha! Ha!) So Arm was Alarmed Hey!... Loved it. Going into my Fav's... MoonBee
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Date: 9/9/2009 7:56:00 PM
Lol, smile, definitely on a roll. Sincerely, John Moses
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Date: 9/9/2009 7:30:00 PM
you are on a roll with these humorous poems. they are a fresh of breath air . keep up the good work! ;-)
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Date: 9/9/2009 12:28:00 PM
Clever and cute poem, Sara!! ~ Carrie
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