The Heart

Life is like a rose It takes the breath away There's a delicate and fragile story, Hesitant to be expressed The heart is weary As it has been worn by many. However even a weary heart can find a sunrise Where it becomes relaxed, Willing to share some of its wrinkles Hoping that another heart can smooth them out.

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Skat A

Date: 1/9/2016 3:08:00 PM

Paige,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2016 1:38:00 PM

Hi Paige, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Paige List
Date: 1/9/2016 1:44:00 PM

Thanks. That means a lot. :)