The Heart

holds love deep within and for this cries out in pain yet the heart beats on

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/7/2020 4:47:00 PM

Lovely senyru, yet the heart beats on. Perfect last line. Tom

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/9/2020 8:05:00 PM

Thank you Tom. I love a good last line!

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/7/2020 4:12:00 PM

Right on Sandra. You nailed this one.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/9/2020 8:04:00 PM

Thank you Daniel. Glad that you thought so.

Sanjay Karmakar

Date: 2/7/2020 3:21:00 PM

materialistic the heart , so on! but love have the power to crunch it. Nicely written. All the good wishes for you my dear poet. Have a good day.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/9/2020 8:03:00 PM

Thank you, Sanjay, for your kind comment and the good wishes. Both are appreciated.