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THE HEALING SUN

THE HEALING SUN


Painful long night passed
Tears on pillow ran many
Dreams forgot to come

Sun came through window
Found lonely suffering heart
Healing wound at once!


© Demetrios Trifiatis
    02 June 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/6/2013 6:16:00 PM
Beautiful piece! This is nice! - Edward
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Date: 6/2/2013 11:57:00 PM
very nice Haiku. I like the way the Sun healed your suffering heart. Yes with a new day it is a new life. completely new life. You are blissful if you treat your life this way. For you I bet it is easy. for me it is so difficult , I keep on falling to my yesterday. Thanks for your comment on my" You and I". I did it in a rush. So I don't know whether this would be qualified enough for a contest, even though I submitted. .Love and Hugs/ Manel
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Date: 6/3/2013 12:18:00 AM
Thank you Manel, I think it will do just fine!
Date: 6/2/2013 11:01:00 AM
i like the positive feel of this work, so sun-shiny despite the pain... uplifting me no end!.. fine work and huggs!..:)
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Date: 6/2/2013 2:46:00 PM
Life starts anew every day, so we have to be positive! Dum spiro spero! As long as I live I hope! Thank you for your visit and your lovely comment!
Date: 6/2/2013 8:29:00 AM
Beautiful, sad and hopeful. I liked this a lot.
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Date: 6/2/2013 10:16:00 AM
After the storm the sunshine! Thank you, Seosamh, for your visit and your approving comment!
Date: 6/2/2013 7:08:00 AM
- Long nights without sleep comes .... they are well known. - - The sun is a delight! - Touching and very well written Demetrios ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/2/2013 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. This was my first Haiku! Appreciate your comment!
Date: 6/2/2013 5:07:00 AM
simple and lovely enjoyed it Shadow
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Date: 6/2/2013 5:14:00 AM
My dear, Shadow, thank you for your visit and your kind comment!
Date: 6/2/2013 4:25:00 AM
peace friend Demetrios.
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Date: 6/2/2013 5:15:00 AM
Were we at war, my friend Michael? Thank you for visiting! Peace to you too!
Date: 6/2/2013 12:43:00 AM
May the sun always warm your heart, my dear poet. Filakia
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Date: 6/2/2013 5:17:00 AM
As long as I have good friends, it will! Thank you so much for your visit and your gracious wish!