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The Healing Sun

THE HEALING SUN Painful long night passed Tears on pillow ran many Dreams forgot to come Sun came through window Found lonely suffering heart Healing wound at once! © Demetrios Trifiatis 02 June 2013

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Edward Orozco

Date: 6/6/2013 6:16:00 PM

Beautiful piece! This is nice! - Edward

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 6/2/2013 11:57:00 PM

very nice Haiku. I like the way the Sun healed your suffering heart. Yes with a new day it is a new life. completely new life. You are blissful if you treat your life this way. For you I bet it is easy. for me it is so difficult , I keep on falling to my yesterday. Thanks for your comment on my" You and I". I did it in a rush. So I don't know whether this would be qualified enough for a contest, even though I submitted. .Love and Hugs/ Manel

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/3/2013 12:18:00 AM

Thank you Manel, I think it will do just fine!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/2/2013 11:01:00 AM

i like the positive feel of this work, so sun-shiny despite the pain... uplifting me no end!.. fine work and huggs!..:)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/2/2013 2:46:00 PM

Life starts anew every day, so we have to be positive! Dum spiro spero! As long as I live I hope! Thank you for your visit and your lovely comment!

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 6/2/2013 8:29:00 AM

Beautiful, sad and hopeful. I liked this a lot.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/2/2013 10:16:00 AM

After the storm the sunshine! Thank you, Seosamh, for your visit and your approving comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2013 7:08:00 AM

- Long nights without sleep comes .... they are well known. - - The sun is a delight! - Touching and very well written Demetrios ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/2/2013 8:09:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. This was my first Haiku! Appreciate your comment!