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cascading over jutting rocks the melodious water of salvation cleanses my soul ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Placed 1st in Brian Strand's Pick A Contest (April 2020) © 29th February 2020

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Date: 11/21/2020 4:04:00 PM
A wonderful baptism :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/24/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thank you, Angela :) Regards // paul
Date: 4/17/2020 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Great picture to go with your poem. Have a wonderful weekend.........
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Date: 4/18/2020 3:29:00 AM
Thank you for a lovely pleasant visit, Paula:) Have a nice day...stay safe! Regards // paul
Date: 4/17/2020 7:26:00 AM
A beautiful tanka in everyway! Congratulations, for sore. Panagiota xx
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Date: 4/17/2020 10:17:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment and congrats, Panagiota. ~ Warm regards // paul
Date: 4/17/2020 2:07:00 AM
Beauty in such few words! Loved it Paul congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 4/17/2020 9:46:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda. I can say the same about your top winning entry, too:) Regards // paul
Date: 3/23/2020 8:10:00 PM
Hi Paul, you have such a gentle way with your golden words. A wonderful image is painted in the mind as I read your wonderful words. This Tanka sings in the soul my friend. You are a true poet. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike. A fav.
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Date: 3/25/2020 1:58:00 PM
You are too generous, my friend...Thank you. Best regards // paul
Date: 3/7/2020 4:02:00 PM
Your way with words enchants, dear one.
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Date: 3/8/2020 1:19:00 PM
Thank you dear, Eileen. You're always so good to me. Hugs // paul
Date: 3/5/2020 8:57:00 PM
I just love this one and how beautifully it goes with that picture
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Date: 3/6/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. The picture prompted my muse. Regards // paul
Date: 3/4/2020 8:23:00 PM
Hi Paul, Your poem works well with your photo. Nice uplifting and cleansing piece. Where is this stream? Have a wonderful evening my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/5/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis. I'm glad you found it uplifting. I've been told that the stream of salvation flows freely from Calvary! Warm regards // paul
Date: 3/4/2020 1:59:00 PM
What a wonderful write and the cascading, melodious water of salvation turly cleanses the soul, so heartfelt Paul. Warm regards and hugs my friend, Jenny.
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Date: 3/4/2020 4:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jenny. So pleased you found it to your liking. ~ Warm regards and hugs my dear friend. // paul
Date: 3/3/2020 5:48:00 AM
And rinses my eyes too, when I read this beauty Paul. thank you for sharing xo
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Date: 3/3/2020 11:32:00 AM
I am so glad you liked my little offering, Vienna...thank you! Warm regards /x/ paul
Date: 3/3/2020 5:40:00 AM
Divine, dearest Paul!
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Date: 3/3/2020 10:51:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Regards // paul
Date: 3/2/2020 11:13:00 AM
Such an uplifting write. Great tanka, Paul.I enjoyed it.
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Date: 3/2/2020 4:45:00 PM
I'm so glad you liked it and found it uplifting, Supraja...thank you. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 2/29/2020 5:09:00 PM
A perfect combination of the arts, well done Paul...
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Date: 3/2/2020 3:55:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul
Date: 2/29/2020 5:09:00 PM
Good one. I like the spiritual theme. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 2/29/2020 5:12:00 PM
Thank you Sara; always a pleasure to have you stopping by. Regards // paul
Date: 2/29/2020 3:58:00 PM
Lovely poem, Paul.
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Date: 2/29/2020 4:53:00 PM
Thank you, Line. All the best // paul
Date: 2/29/2020 3:24:00 PM
Lovely feel and sound to your poem Paul.
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Date: 2/29/2020 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Best regards // paul
Date: 2/29/2020 1:51:00 PM
Well composed Paul. Hope you're well. Tom
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Date: 2/29/2020 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Tom...keeping fine and active:) Regards // paul
Date: 2/29/2020 1:39:00 PM
Oh so beautiful. I love this Paul. A favorite :)
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Date: 2/29/2020 3:31:00 PM
Thank you so much on both counts, Heidi. Enjoy the weekend:) // paul
Date: 2/29/2020 12:20:00 PM
You did this very well Paul...
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Date: 2/29/2020 3:30:00 PM
Thank you, S-1. Regards // paul
Date: 2/29/2020 11:22:00 AM
excellent metaphor Paul , adding this gem to my faves its very uplifting:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 2/29/2020 3:29:00 PM
Double thanks, Jan...both comments and fav are truly appreciated. Hugs // paul

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