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The Haunted House

Our trail led to a hilltop, high above
     the lake, where we had driven to that day.
          But, much to our surprise, abandoned there-
Victorian-style house in disrepair.

With peeling paint, some shutters gone, it stood
     on seedy grass unkempt with weeds and vines.
	We walked around; just two doors-back and front;
the back was sealed; the front- slightly ajar.

As we went thru that door, it fast slammed shut-
     then locked! With bars on windows, no way out!
          The antique furnishings lay thick with dust,
and gray webs glistened in the filtered light.

On left, we saw two standing armored knights-
     there as decor, for sure- but now they moved!
          As they walked forward, screeching awful sounds,
we quickly ran into the next large room

filled up with cobwebbed-portraits on the walls;
     all mouths were moving, saying, "We're the ghosts-
          and masters of this house!  We've caught you now,
and here you'll stay for all eternity!

I yelled and screamed- then felt my body writhe!
     "Oh no, oh no, I need to get away!"
          "Oh, honey, please wake up, it's just a dream!
We're here at home in bed- just you and me."


August 21, 2018

~2nd Place~
Contest: The Haunted House (Scare Me Or Make Me Laugh)
Sponsor: Dear Heart
Judged: 09/01/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:00 PM
Hahaha... I'm a little late, Sandra, great imagery and story. Big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
La France Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 11:16 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned scary tale, well done !
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:34 PM
Thank you, Dear Heart, for your lovely comment and congratulations. It was a fun poem to work on! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 5:29 PM
I enjoyed traveling through your scary nightnare Sandra. Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! : )6bx
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Thank you, Connie, for your nice comment and congrats! I enjoyed working on it! Hugs, Sandra
Messina Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 12:55 PM
You sure do know how to tell a scary funny story..lol Great write as usual, Sandra...Congrats on your well deserved win...Charlie
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:32 PM
Thank you, Charlie, for your visit, congrats, and uplifting comments! Much appreciated! Sandra :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 10:13 AM
You scared us and got a laugh too! Love the knights! Best for a win!
Haight Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, Kim! I had fun with it! I appreciate your visit and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Scary stuff, Sandra! ~ gw
Haight Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 6:58 AM
Thank you so much, George! A fun write indeed! Sandra :)
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