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The Haunted House

There’s an old abandoned Victorian house on the hill
Rumored to be haunted by a past murderous kill
No one dares to go in it due to their fears
It’s believed no one’s been in it for years

It’s been newly listed on the market for sale
A beautiful old house, priced cheap, it’s a steal 
I will have to go over to look at it and see
If it’s really as haunted as rumored to be

As I walk through the door the air gets very thick
the door closes behind me and locks with a loud click
distracted by the beautiful old antiques covered with dust
I know then, it has to be, that buying this house is a must

I am getting excited to give this beauty a new story
By fantasizing about restoring it back to its glory
Then music starts to play as the lights flicker on
I am frozen but mesmerized by the beautiful song

As I start to leave and head towards the door
I look back as I hear a creek on the floor 
a ghostly spirit appears and calls out my name
I run out the door, screaming like I'm insane

I decided I no longer want to own this home
this experience has chilled me to the bone
The beautiful old Victorian will remain for sale
Unless some other fool is brave enough to prevail


6/24/19 submitted to contest: Your Personal Perfect Poem Pick
             Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Your fantastic story telling captivated me, Tania. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kitchin Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Thank you Susan! :)
Roper Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:09 PM
I'm a little late, Tania, great imagery and story. Big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
Kitchin Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 11:02 AM
thank you Eve!
La France Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my contest with this scary poem, you are a great storyteller, well done !
Kitchin Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Thank you, it was a fun contest!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Great imagery in this wonderful entry Tania. Congratulations on your win! : )
Kitchin Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 8:40 PM
thank you!
Messina Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Excellent write, Tania. the flow and the rhymes are perfectly written. Congrats on your win...Charlie
Kitchin Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 3:49 PM
thank you!
Arowolo Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Beautiful rhymes ,Tania...You are a wonderful writer and good poet...Congrats on your superb win in this contest...
Kitchin Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 12:19 PM
thank you!
Callus Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 2:52 PM
The perfect narrative to haunt anybody's mind, Tania! At least you held on quite a while before succumbing to fear!! Regards // paul
Kitchin Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 3:34 PM
thank you Paul
Dutta Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 12:31 PM
So nicely composed. All the best.
Kitchin Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 2:55 PM
thank you!
Hinshaw Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Outstanding write, Tania, and bound to be at the top of the winner's list - good luck and thanks for your kind comments re my entry in the contest - Bob
Kitchin Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 11:08 AM
Thank you Bob!
Stebbings Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 4:30 AM
Lovely story that drew me in right from the start. Good luck in the contest. // Barry
Kitchin Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 4:31 AM
Thank you Barry!
Man Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 11:35 AM
Tonia, great write that puts me in the midst of your story. You’re gifted at writing such a spook tale!
Kitchin Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 3:44 PM
thank you for your kind and encouraging words!
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 6:43 AM
Very descriptive tale Tania love the way you build up the story:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Love the additional stanza it finishes off the poem perfectly!:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:03 AM
thank you Jan!
Michael Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Nice...I enjoyed the write...All the best Tania
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:57 PM
thank you!
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